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 Yes, it’s another Sunday, time for another snippet. I think everyone who reads this will know the score – just click on the pic to get to the list.

I’m hoping to do a bit better this week for getting round the group. Sorry if I didn’t get to you last week.

Picking up again from last week where the argument between Kit and Wigram was broken up by O’Neill, who outranks them both.

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O’Neill looked them over with a knowing eye and jerked his thumb towards the quarterdeck. “You don’t need to convince me. He‘s awake and wants to know what’s going on,” he said. “So—Wigram, Penrose, and you, too, Denny, come with me and the rest of you shut up and go back to sleep unless you want to changes watches now? Penrose, leave the shirt – a little night air won’t hurt you. ”

Kit was half way along the deck before he realised both Wigram and Denny were dragging their heels.

O’Neill glanced at him and shook his head. “You did it right and proper.”

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Uh oh, they’re in trouble.

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Hump Day Hook #6

It’s time for Hump Day Hook – a weekly event where authors share bits of their work.

My bit this week is from my old historical novel, untitled, that’s part Regency romance and part seeing how many cliches I can cram into it. Carrying on from last week with Lady Cicely, and the plot begins to thicken, if not clot, a bit.

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The morning room’s windows offered a fine view of the Park, but today Cicely had no eyes for the fashionable world walking, riding and driving below. Seated at her desk, her spectacles firmly upon her tip-tilted nose, she methodically sorted her correspondence into neat piles, commenting upon the contents of the envelopes to her maid.
“Two more invitations, Agnes. Lord and Lady Markham are making up a party for the theatre – that one may go on the “yes” pile, and the other is for Mrs Beauchamp’s ball, though I fear I shall be indisposed.”
“But, Milady,” Agnes protested, looking up from her stitching, “young Mister Julian is so fond of you and has such pretty manners.”
“He is a simpering milksop. I have no time for any man who would write an Ode to my eyebrows.” And the eyebrows, two elegant arcs several shades darker than her silver-gilt curls, rose derisively.
Agnes sighed and murmured a name under her breath that, most unfortunately, Cicely heard.
“How dare you speak that name in my presence,” she snapped. “If you cannot hold your tongue, get out.”

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Ooh, girl gotta temper! so what has rattled Lady Ciceley’s cage. Tune in next week to find out!

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Here we go again, folks, with another bunch of sentences taken from a variety of authors, genres and works. Just click on the picture to get to the list of links.

My excerpt is from On A Lee Shore, again, and picks up directly from last week’s.

Denny, one of nature’s innocents, has been cozened by Bosun Wigram into giving Kit a bit of a surprise. Kit, woken from sleep, thumped Denny, realised what had happened and thumped Wigram, waking the entire watch in the process. It’s a short fight, Kit is hauled off Wigram by Lewis and Protheroe, who seems inclined to flirt.

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Some laughed at that, but others shouted angrily. One man claimed he’d seen this and another that and people who couldn’t have possibly seen anything expressed an opinion.
“Stow it!” O’Neill was there, lantern in hand and glaring angrily around. “What are you at? Jesus, Mary and Joseph, this is a fo’csle not a bear pit.”
“Penrose attacked Denny and hit me when I intervened,” Wigram snapped. “I knew it was a mistake to bring him aboard.”

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More next week.

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A WTF moment

Towards the end of last month I decided to give myself a bit of a kick in the pants about continuing with A Fierce Reaping – I’ve left it so long for one reason and another that the voices in my head are sulking – and chose to do it by getting myself some inspirational works. With one exception they are one penny plus postage books from Amazon market place. Jarman’s translation of Y Gododdin [the OMG exception], books on the Dark Ages in the Uk and in Europe, both illustrated by the late great Angus MacBride plus two scholarly works on King Arthur’s life and times [as close as I’m going to get to AD 590 for a penny].

At least I assumed they were scholarly and I’m still prepared to give The Age of Arthur by John Morris the benefit of the doubt, but the other one … oh dearie me.
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Hump Day Hook #5

Another Wednesday and another hook

Hump Day Hook is a weekly event where a bunch of authors post excerpts of their own work then whizz around from blog to blog reading and being nice about other people’s 🙂

I’m posting bits of a very old story that’s a little bit Georgette Heyer and a little bit Barbara Cartland and a teensy bit Mad Magazine.

This is the beginning of chapter 2, and a change of POV. In fact more than one. At that point in my writing experience I’d never heard of POV or that it was preferable to stick to just one at a time so please excuse the 3rd person omni.

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The April sun was bright, but a chill wind with a hint of showers prompted Lady Cicely Stanton-Rivers to walk more briskly along the pavement and up the steps to her front door. As she set her neatly shod foot upon the top step, the door swung open and she swept through the porch and into the hall, her maid bustling at her heels.
“Did you enjoy your walk, my lady?” asked the butler, a tray piled high with envelopes in his hands.
“Well enough, Tench,” Lady Cicely replied. “The weather is uncommonly fine for the season. Are all those for me?”
“Yes, my lady. Shall I have some tea carried up to the morning room?”
Cicely thanked him and began to sort through the envelopes and packets as she climbed the sweeping marble staircase. As she glanced at the last of them she gave a little sigh, then passed out of sight.
“If a lady as fine and kind as our Lady Cicely was hanging on my every word,” the younger of the two footmen commented to his fellow, “you’d not catch me running off with some fat draper’s widow, no matter how well-heeled she was.”
Tench turned upon him, brows raised loftily. “Thank you for that information, young Horace,” he said. “I’ll be sure to pass it on.” Then he departed for his domain below stairs leaving Horace in no way discomfited, for he had long since learned that Tench’s bark was far worse than his bite.

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This is, of course, a transparent ploy to put off telling you what Aubrey got up to. *smug face*

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Or is it 5. I can’t remember. Anyhow …

It’s Sunday, time for Weekend Writing Warriors – a weekly event where authors from all over post bits of their works, published, polished, barely finished, in the rough or just shiny ideas. This means it’s time for another snippet from On A Lee Shore, with a little variation. I’ve been tagged for the Lucky Seven meme by Ciaran Dwynvil (I keep wanting to put an F in that and spell it Welsh ways) so rather than make a separate post I’m posting seven sentences instead of eight.

Last week Kit had been dragged off Wigram, one of the ship’s officers, who had persuaded one of the more easily influenced members of the crew that Kit was a girl.

“You told Denny to do that.”
“Ay,” one of the men holding Kit agreed. “Denny was there when we were wondering.” He grinned as Kit stared at him. “Though for my own part I think you’re fine as you are.”
Duw, Protheroe, cariad,” the other said. “And you promised to cleave to me only.”

Dialogue makes for a very short snippet. More next week.

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comfy chairMy guest today is Lisa Henry, resident in Australia but her imagination roams the world and the genres from contemporary drama to ancient history. Her work has received glowing reviews and has been picked as The Romance Reviews top picks.

Thank you very much, Lisa for agreeing to answer my questions today.

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Elin: Do you have a crisp mental picture of your characters or are they more a thought and a feeling than an image?

Lisa: I like to know what makes my characters tick, but I never have more than a vague idea of their physical descriptions in my head. I’ll write sticky notes about eye colour, hair colour, and who is taller than who (otherwise I’d get mixed up when it comes to love scenes) but that’s about the extent of it. When I read I usually like to fill in most of those gaps for myself, and I think a lot of readers do. Sometimes when an author reveals their inspiration for a character I’m very surprised. Wait, that’s not how I pictured him at all!

Elin: Do you find there to be a lot of structural differences between a relationship driven story and one with masses of action?

Lisa: I tend to write relationship driven stories rather than action, simply because I think I’m better at it. I love reading a great action sequence, but I do find them trickier to write. In an action driven story you have to keep a very tight pace, and one piece of action has to lead directly to the next and so on. In a relationship driven story you’re allowed more space to breathe and reflect, I think, which suits my style more.

Elin: Are you a plotter or a pantser?

Lisa: I’m a pantser who is attempting to be a reformed-pantser, but I have found that whenever I attempt to sit down and plot, I get bored with it because I just want to dive right into the writing. So instead of working more at the beginning with plotting, I work more at the end with brutal editing. There is often very little in common between my first and final drafts.

Elin: Villains – incredibly important in fiction since they challenge the main protagonists and give them something to contend with beyond the tension of a developing relationship. What sort of villains do you prize? A moustache-twirling nightmare or … ?

Lisa: I love villains, but no moustache-twirlers for me. I like my villains to be more complicated than that, and I think it’s important to remember that “evil for the sake of evil” is incredibly rare. Most villains don’t think they’re evil, which makes them much more terrifying. The closest thing I’ve ever written to a moustache-twirling villain would be Vornis from The Island, but even he’s not evil just for the sake of it. He makes examples of the men who cross him because it is necessary in his line of work. He happens to enjoy it as well, but it’s not done without reason.
I think Nero is one of history’s most fascinating and complicated villains, because he really did start out with so much promise and so many good intentions. Because of that, it’s tempting to be somewhat sympathetic towards him: you can see how the people around him poisoned his mind, you can see how tormented he was, and you can see how power corrupted him. That aside, he was a complete monster by the end, and deserved to die.

Elin: Do you enjoy research for its own sake or do you just do what is necessary for each project? What was the most interesting fact you discovered in the course of your research that didn’t make it into your novel?

Lisa: I can get totally lost in research, because it’s all too fascinating. I love learning about how everyday people lived, and I try to get the details right. I have a by-no-means-comprehensive list in my head that I need to check off before I feel comfortable writing about an historical period. It includes things like what did they use instead of toilet paper, what did they use for birth control, what did their shoes look like, what did their houses look like, and what did they eat for dinner? I think you have to know the basics before you can attempt to recreate a world, even if those details don’t make it to the page.

One of the most fascinating things I learned about Ancient Rome that never made it into He Is Worthy — and was never going to, I just got completely sidetracked — was about cosmetic surgery. Yes, in Ancient Rome you could get breast reductions, nose jobs, and eyelifts. The Romans knew about blood and circulation, and even how to reshape cartilage, but given that they didn’t know about germs, or have much in the way of anesthetic, I imagine you would have to be very brave or very desperate to go under the knife.

Elin: Short vs long – which do you prefer to read/write?

Lisa: I prefer to write long, but I’ll read anything. As long as the story pulls me in, I don’t mind if it’s a tiny piece of flash fiction, or War and Peace.

Elin: Would you say that a short story is harder to write than a long one?

Lisa: Absolutely! For me, at least, which is why I generally write long. Short stories require almost a different skill set. They have to be sharper, and neatly honed, if that makes sense. I like that in longer works I can detour a little bit, and see where it takes me. It probably comes back to being a pantser rather than a plotter.

Elin: Put together your ideal team of men – drawing from all and any walks of life, fictional or non-fictional – who you would want to come to your rescue if menaced by muggers/alligators/fundamentalists?

Lisa: I’m going to choose all fictional, since my chances of a happy ending are stronger there. I think Dean from Supernatural would be great in the case of both muggers and alligators, and demons of course, but maybe not fundamentalists. In the case of fundamentalists, I would want a Special Ops team including James Bond, Boromir from The Lord of The Rings, Daryl Dixon from The Walking Dead, and Jack Bauer from 24. And, just to cover all bases, the Scarlet Pimpernel. Oh, and Moriarty from the BBC’s Sherlock. I want him planning the entire operation.

I don’t think I’ve left any room for error there…

Elin: “Had we but world enough and time” and no other commitments, is there anything you would write that you’ve been eyeing and putting off because it’s just too big a project?

Lisa: I want to write a series of novels set in the one universe, full of political machinations that would make the Borgias proud. At the moment I’m leaning towards space opera rather than historical, because that way I can do all the world building myself, and fit all the pieces together without having to worry about historical accuracy. But I wouldn’t say I’m putting it off because it’s too big a project — I’m putting it off because I keep getting distracted by new, shiny ideas.

I’m also being plagued by plot bunnies for a sequel to Dark Space, an m/m romance that came out in December. I’ve never written anything before with the intention of writing a sequel, so this feels entirely ambitious for me. But Dark Space has been so well received, and I loved writing in Brady’s voice so much, that I just know I’m going to have to go back to that world.

Elin: Borgias in space? You can put me down for one of those.
When you have been writing a scene, have you ever scared yourself/upset yourself so much that you decided to tone it down a bit?

Lisa: There was one scene in an earlier draft of He Is Worthy that I cut, because it was just too much. I wanted to show Nero’s brutality, so I had a scene written from Aenor’s POV where another slave was turned into a human torch. When I’d finished it was just too horrible, so instead that scene was cut down to the one sentence where Senna is in the gardens and sees the remains of the slave. I didn’t want to shy away from showing how monstrous Nero was, but that scene was just too upsetting.

Elin: I’m very glad you didn’t put that in the book. The little bit you did include was upsetting enough, though necessary, I think, to get across just how perilous a slave’s position was in that society. What are you working on at present?

Lisa: At the moment I’m in the process of editing The Good Boy, co-written with the amazing J. A. Rock, which is a contemporary m/m with a BDSM theme, which will be released around March by Loose Id. I’m currently writing another historical, set in Wyoming in 1870, with the working title Sweetwater. My MC, Elijah, is partially deaf thanks to Scarlet Fever, and finds himself having to choose between two very different men with two very different agendas.

Elin: Could we please have an excerpt?

Lisa: I’ll go with Sweetwater, since this site is all about historicals! This is the (very unedited) opening scene:

1870, South Pass City, Wyoming Territory

A spray of blood hit his face like hot rain, and Elijah Carter clamped his mouth shut.
“Hold him! Hold him!”
The rope had slipped when Dawson made the first cut, and the yearling was trying to buck them off now. Elijah and Lovell had it pushed against the fencepost and were trying to hold it there, Lovell against its hindquarters and Elijah shoulder-to-shoulder with the yearling. Elijah didn’t know which of them had the worst end of it. He wasn’t sorry to be out of the way of those back legs, but if the swinging thick skull of the panicked animal collided with his, he’d be in real trouble. Elijah pushed his forehead against the yearling’s neck. Closer was safer, if they could hold it.
Dawson was drunk, probably. His hands shook too much, and they were weak too. He’d been a good butcher once, back when Elijah first started working with him scrubbing the floors and the counters in the shop and doing the deliveries. Then Dawson’s drinking had picked up, and now he couldn’t even slaughter a yearling without fucking it up.
Elijah’s cheek scraped against the coarse coat of the yearling. He smelled blood and dust.
The yearling pitched forward and Elijah’s grip slipped.
“I said hold him, you simple deaf cunt!” Dawson grunted.
Elijah didn’t need to see the shape of Dawson’s mouth in the lamplight to make out the words. He’d heard the insult often enough.
Hot blood washed over Elijah’s fingers. He dug his boots in the dirt, fighting against the struggling animal. The yearling bellowed — a long, high-pitched sound that vibrated against Elijah’s face, his hands. It moved through him, and jarred his bones.
Elijah closed his eyes as Dawson’s knife passed close in front of his face. He hoped Dawson wasn’t drunk enough to take his fingers with the next cut. He hoped the lamp hanging off the fence gave enough light for Dawson to finish the task.
Working in the dark was dangerous, but it had to be done. The beasts were mavericks, brought down from the hills into South Pass City. They had to be slaughtered and butchered under the cover of the night, and served up on dinner plates all over town before the sheriff came asking questions.
Elijah hadn’t seen the faces of the men who’d herded them into town. There had been maybe four of them, all wearing their hats pulled low. In the darkness, they could have been anyone. Elijah hadn’t stared. It was safer that way. He’d stayed out of the way while Dawson had done business with the men, then Lovell had come to fetch him. And here they were.
The yearling bellowed again.
Blood again. A flood of it this time, as free flowing and hot as bathwater poured from a kettle. It turned Elijah’s stomach, and he fought the instinct to pull away.
The yearling sank to its knees and Elijah went forward with it. He could hear its heartbeat echoing inside his skull, in panicked counterpoint to his own. It beat slower, and slower still.
Elijah was slick with blood. He shifted back, his body aching. He kept one bloodied hand on the neck of the yearling, his fingers splayed. It was too weak to struggle now. Its ears flicked back and forth and its eyes rolled.
The yearling’s breath came in short pants. So did Elijah’s. Kneeling together in the dirt, they waited. Blood, black in the night, pooled around them.
Dawson laughed, lifting his arm to wipe his sweaty forehead on his sleeve. The blade of the knife made an arc in the scant lamplight. Dawson’s skin was yellow and puffy these days. His gut was bloated. Elijah had read enough of Dr. Carter’s medical books to recognize it as cirrhosis. Dawson was an asshole, and every day, every drink, he was closer to death. Elijah had more sympathy for the yearling than the butcher.
The yearling sighed, stilled.
Lovell dropped a hand on Elijah’s shoulder. “We’re done.”
Lovell never treated Elijah like a fool. Never pulled his mouth into exaggerated shapes to mock the way Elijah spoke. Never laughed at him or slapped him in the head for being slow to understand.
Elijah rose to his feet, bracing himself against the dead yearling. The beast felt more unyielding now than when it had been struggling against them. Dead things always did. The difference between alive and dead was both infinitesimal and immense: the tiny space of only a single heartbeat was as wide as an abyss.
Elijah spat, and wiped his hands on his bloody apron for all the difference that it made.

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Thank you, Lisa, that was terrific.

If you would like to follow Lisa online you can find her blog here, on Twitter as
@LisaHenryOnline and she hangs out on Goodreads a lot too.

He Is Worthy

Rome, 68 A.D. Novius Senna is one of the most feared men in Rome. He’s part of the emperor’s inner circle at a time when being Nero’s friend is almost as dangerous as being his enemy. Senna knows that better men than he have been sacrificed to Nero’s madness—he’s the one who tells them to fall on their swords. He hates what he’s become to keep his family safe. He hates Nero more.

Aenor is a newly-enslaved Bructeri trader, brutalized and humiliated for Nero’s entertainment. He’s homesick and frightened, but not entirely cowed. He’s also exactly what Senna has been looking for: a slave strong enough to help him assassinate Nero.

It’s suicide, but it’s worth it. Senna yearns to rid Rome of a tyrant, and nothing short of death will bring him peace for his crimes. Aenor hungers for revenge, and dying is his only escape from Rome’s tyranny. They have nothing left to lose, except the one thing they never expected to find—each other.

 

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Here we go – the weekly posting where a bunch of authors post excerpts from their work. Click on the pen and sword picture to get to the list of other participants.

My excerpt is from my novel “On A Lee Shore” and carries on directly from last week. Kit Penrose, ex-navy and now a very reluctant pirate, has been awoken by someone trying to put their hand in his pants. He lashes out then realises that he has clobbered Denny, a ‘natural’ creature and the boat’s unofficial mascot, who was talked into doing it by Wigram, the bo’sun and a thoroughly nasty piece of work.

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Wigram looked stunned that anyone should attempt to hit him. He reached for his pistol, but Kit clubbed it from his hand and closed with him, pounding a fist under his ribs, and blocking Wigram’s blow with his forearm. Wigram may have been a pirate, but he didn’t know any dirty tricks that weren’t practiced every day in the berths of an English war ship, and Kit soon had him on the back foot. As they struggled to damage each other, hands reached to pull them away and other men got between them.
“Damn your eyes,” Wigram swore. “Did you see that, lads – he hit poor Denny—for nothing—and then went for me.”
“I…I…” Kit was almost incoherent with anger. He spat blood—the cut on his lip had opened again—and strained against the hands holding him, but the two stocky Welshmen hoisted him up until his feet barely touched the floor.

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Kit has a temper *nods*

PS I’ll be giving away a copy of On a Lee Shore to a commenter on Wednesday March 13th because that’s  my anniversary of starting this blog.  You have been warned!

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This Valentine’s Day, we invite you to join us in thumbing our noses at Cupid, Love and the Whole Schmaltzy Holiday!!

Introducing …

LOVE BITES: An Anti♥Valentine Blog Hop

Hostesses: The Inklingettes

Theme: Love Run Amuk, Aground or Otherwise Off Course

Schedule: Friday, February 8 through Thursday, February 14

Word Count: 250 Words

Incentive: Community spirit, inky fun and lots of laughs!

Further Incentive: Prizes! (Judging Details TBA)

* 6 Broken-hearted bookmarks made by the Divine Hammer

* A one-of-a-kind painting personalized with a quote from the winners piece donated by Lee Clements
*A one hour coaching session by Rebecca T Dickson

And this is where to sign up for it.

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Here’s my bit:

Rome, about 50 AD

Valens winced as the slimy hide wrapped around his loins. It has lost the heat of its recently deceased previous owner but now smelled even worse.

Sextus, a pace or two to his right, gave a disgusted grunt, and Valens bit his lips together to stifle a snigger. Lupercalia was a serious religious ceremony. It was an honour to be chosen to have ones manly parts swathed with newly harvested goat skin, hairy side out, and to run through the streets of Rome whacking women with more strips of skin to increase their fertility.

There was little difference in hairiness between the goatskin and Sextus’s belly. It was a nice belly – rounded with good feeding, but with solid muscle beneath – and Valens wouldn’t have minded getting to know it, and the rest better. Sadly, they were so close in rank  that it was better not to ask.

Warm wet touched his face – the traditional anointing with blood on brow and cheeks and breast. After which he and Sextus were supposed to laugh uproariously. A drip tickled its way down his chest, skirting a nipple, then on down. Sextus was watching it as the high priest made the invocation.

“Don’t forget,” Sextus muttered as they prepared to run.  “Lucilla and Proserpina will be at the corner by the temple of Isis. I promised them both a good thwack.”

Valens sighed. Lupercalia – murdered goats, blood, laughter, whipping women . Surely there was an easier way to celebrate spring?

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Hump Day Hook #3

Happy Wednesday! And it being Wednesday means that it’s time for another Hump Day Hook! 

Click on that link for a list of contributing authors. Not all of them are writing erotica – I’m not – and not all the snippets are hooks – mine aren’t usually – but they are worth looking at and great fun.

My bit is once again from years ago when I was in a dead boring job and desperately needed smething to occupy the squirrely bit of my brain. What better than writing pastiche of one of my favourite authors – Georgette Heyer – while cocking a snook at Barbara Cartland in the process? I had fun for about 40 thousand words, then my hard drive fried and I was left with 3ok printed out on continuous sheets on an old dot matrix printer – yes I’ve been using computers THAT long.

Anyhow – last week Sir Anthony and Chum decided to carry on playing cards together.

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“I’ll cut with you,” Aubrey offered. “Your grey hack against my chestnut.”
“Oh no,” Cholmondeley shook his head, “not that ewe-necked nag, Put up something worth having for pity’s sake.”
Aubrey laughed, Chum’s affection for his grey was well known. He scribbled a few words onto a piece of paper and passed it to his friend.
“There’s my stake,” he declared, “take it or leave it.”
Cholmondeley shouted with laughter.
“I’ll take it by all means. You go first …Oh, very good Aubrey…But not quite good enough. I’ll keep this,” he waved the piece of paper, “next to my heart.”
“Just see that you do, “ Aubrey warned. “I’m ready for some supper. Coming?”
“Later. I’m off the join Charles and Freddy at the dice.” Chum rose to his feet and placed a cigarillo between his teeth. “If I can beat you tonight, I should be able to beat anybody!”

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So, what did Chum win? Why will he keep the IOU close to his heart?

Not telling. You’ll have to come back to find out. 🙂

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