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Time for another eight sentences from On A Lee Shore. If you recall Kit had a painful awakening when someone grabbed his family jewels.

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Denny sat on the floor, holding his nose and sobbing. “You di’n oughter dun that,” he wept. “That HURT!” He waved a hand at Wigram who was a few paces away, holding his sides. “He said you was a maid. He said you wouldn’t mind.” Denny seemed more heartbroken at the betrayal than from the pain of his nose and Kit was overcome with pity, and with rage at how both he and poor Denny had been made to look ridiculous.

“Wigram,” Kit snarled and flung himself at the bo’sun’s throat.

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So – what’s the pirate punishment for striking an officer? Find out – um – in a few weeks. Eight sentences at a time doesn’t exactly speed the story along.

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Derivative works

If you write derivative [fan] fiction – I used to, it’s a brilliant way of trying things and getting feedback on what works and what doesn’t – you’re probably used to getting criticism from people who feel that it’s plagiarism, parasitic, unfair to the author etc.

I wonder what they’d make of this video trailer for the BBC?

I think it’s rather gorgeous, especially for the inclusion of 2 same sex couples, but found some of the lines in the poem familiar while not recognising the whole, if you know what I mean. Today I remembered to Google a bit of it and it jolly well should have been familiar. There are bits of Keats, Longfellow, Walter Savage Landor, Shelley Tennyson and Arthur O’Shaughnessy with a couple of filler phrases from the compiler poet Alison Chisolm. Apparently the style of poem, which Chisolm invented, as called a ‘cento’.

If this isn’t derivative I don’t know what is.

 

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Quietly delighted

The idea of taking book covers with women in impossible poses and reproducing them with men trying to emulate them isn’t new – Jim Hines has been doing it as a fundraiser and whipping in fellow Sci-fi/fantasy authors to help him in the ensemble pieces – but I do like the idea of redrawing comic books with Hawkeye in the place of the distorted females.

Just cast an eye over the Hawkeye Initiative and join me in having a giggle.

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The Insecure Writers Support Group is – well – what it says on the can really. One day a month we can let out all our fears and frustrations without our readers telling us to put a sock in it or smiling sweetly as they murmur about “First World problems”.

Actually they can if they want, but this is the one day of the month that I’ll feel justified to ignore them.

So – problems.

I’m not writing. Simple as that.  My word count has gone up by approx 1000 words since Christmas and that’s no way to write a novel.

It could  be because a string of interrupted nights means that even if I get up early enough to write I don’t achieve much. Or that I’ve spent 55k words making characters one can care about and now I have to kill most of them off. But wither way it’s blinking well frustrating!

On the other hand, I have edited the second draft of a short story and am about to start a final sweep for things like passive voice and peripatetic body parts. By this time next month I hope I’ll have developed the backbone to have submitted it somewhere.

IWSGis – see you next month.

 

 

 

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Hump Day is here again

This is my second bash at Hump Day Hook, a weekly event where authors post bits of WsIP or published works or, like me, things they are just stooging around with. Click on the link for the list of other participants.

My paragraphs come from a project that is lodged in my files as “Historical Novel” though actually it’s nothing of the kind. It was inspired by a friend who, on a slow day at work, witnessed me acting out all the different roles from a Georgette Heyer novel. “You should write one like that,” she suggested, “only sillier”. So I did.

I’m carrying on immediately from last week. Sir Aubrey Stanton-Rivers, young and foolish, is in a Regency gambling hell with his best mate Cholmondely [pronounced Chumley if that makes it easier] and is generally very pleased with life.

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The red-faced young subaltern opposite just grinned and continued to shuffle the deck.
“Another game?” Aubrey suggested. His coat was off, his neckcloth was on the floor and his blond curls were wildly dishevelled. With his wide-set blue eyes and ingenuous grin he looked like a youthful seraph that had strayed into an antechamber of Hell and found it much to his taste.
“Dammit, you’re too lucky for me,” one of his companions grumbled. “I’m not having you make Chum’s fortune at the expense of mine. I’m for the dice table. Coming, Charles?”
The other man grunted and drained his glass and they both disappeared into the howling throng at the other end of the room. Aubrey gave a crack of laughter.
“You’ll play. Won’t you, Chum?”
“Of course. Your luck never lasts,” Chum pointed out. “Besides, once the drink is in the sense is out and here comes our third bottle.” He grinned and placed the deck squarely upon the table between them.

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Can this end well? Not at this point in the story.

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And now they have identified the poor soul’s body in a skeleton discovered under a car park in Leicester.

How excited you are about this really depends on your familiarity with British history and, if familiar, where you stand on the whole “Richard was a hunchbacked murderer of children/Richard was an excellent king and good caring uncle much maligned by the devilish Tudors” discussion.

Antony Cher’s Richard was a monster with no redeeming qualities. Shakespeare has a lot to answer for.

Just a little catch up for those who don’t know but do care. Edward IV was a superb warrior king and at 6ft 4 one of the tallest men to ever rule in England. His reign brought a terrible civil war to an end and promised a period of peace and prosperity. He was young and had 2 small sons so the succession was assured. When he died suddenly in April 1483, he left his sons and the country in the hands of his younger brother, Richard of York, a man he trusted implicitly and a very able warrior and administrator. Richard had a firm grasp on the country but regencies are always problematical and he knew that the two small boys could be used as tokens in a power play. For their safety, and that of the country, he had them taken to the reasonably luxurious but very secure royal quarters in the Tower, where they had their own household and tutors. Richard visited them often and is reputed to have been very fond of his nephews.

Contemporary accounts describe Richard as small and scholarly yet a doughty fighter on the battlefield. He proved himself as a war leader several times over before the death of his brother and his accession as Regent seems to have been greeted with relief – a steady hand at the helm until 12 yr old Edward V came of age. Richard may not have been universally loved but he was respected.

Yet, somehow between April 1483 and his death in August 1485 this small scholarly man is reputed to have turned into a ravening monster.

At this distance I don’t suppose we will ever know exactly what happened to the Princes in the tower. The usual story is that Richard, desperate to be king in his own name, firstly had them illegitimised then had them murdered in late 1483. The rumour that they were dead circulated and outraged the British aristocracy so much that they invited Harri Tudur, most influential member of the house of Lancaster and reputed to be a descendant of Cadwaladr, the last British king. Or maybe Harri remembered the reign of a previous Richard and how it was brought to an end by another ambitious man – Henry Bolingbroke who became Henry IV.

The skeleton of Richard III, showing the curvature of th spine that would have only caused an uneveness of his shoulders rather than an actual hunch.

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I nearly didn’t do this, because a] I suck and b] I’d forgotten it was Wednesday, but saw it on CC Williams blog. So blame him, ‘kay?

Hump Day Hook requires that  paragraph of a WIP be posted on a Wednesday. Other Humpers or Hookers may be found here.

Today I will be starting to share a story I started to write nearly 30 years ago as a deliberate parody of Mills and Boon Regency romance. To be honest, it’s so different from my current writing style that it makes me wince but there you go. People change and so does their fiction. Anyhowwwwww – here it is.

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      The large room had once been a place of splendour, a suitable setting for the refined pursuits of elegant lords and ladies with powdered hair and paint and patches upon their faces. Now its few remaining beauties were obscured by the poor light and drifting clouds of blue smoke from the pipes and cigarillos of the players at the tables. It was hot, very hot, and the air was thick with fumes of wine, candle grease and harsh tobacco. Sir Aubrey Stanton-Rivers, but a month past his twenty-first birthday and newly come both to his inheritance and its attendant responsibilities, crowed gleefully as he counted up his tricks. “Waiter, another bottle,” he cried. “My luck’s turned at last. Stick with me, Cholmondeley, my boy, and I’ll make your fortune!”

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So Aubrey  and Cholmondely are off on their adventures. Will there be heaving bosoms, light skirts and steely-eyed rakes? Tune in in subsequent weeks to find out!

Business as usual on Sunday, btw, where I will be doing a bit of piracy with snippets from my novel On A Lee Shore.

 

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Last ever Six Sunday

Yeah, sad innit? And I’ve decided that if it is going to be the very last I may as well stick with Gwion and Cynfal for it. I will continue to make a weekly excerpt post but I might sign up for one of the alternatives. There’s a Wednesday one that looks small and fun, and a slightly one on Saturdays but that’s solely M/M erotica so I don’t see much point. What I might do is do the Regency romance parody on Wednesdays and pirates on Sundays, becaus i’m being worse than usual abut keeping up with posting. It’s the winter. i want to hibernate. I think I’m part hedgehog.

Any how …

SSS AFRCarrying on from last week. Cynfal finally managed to finagle his way into Gwion’s bed and a good time was had by all. However, when Cynfal woke up he was alone.  Please note – this is how it arrived on the page during Nanowrimo 2011 and it needs a damned good edit. Please note, also, that it’s not six sentences. What the hell? What’s the worst that can happen?

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Cynfal stretched and grinned at the ceiling. Whether Gwion was uncomfortable or not Cynfal had cause for good cheer. He couldn’t remember a better ride – that strength, the neediness. Please all the gods it wasn’t a one off!

Dressed and with the bowl in his hand he went to the door and looked out.

Wrapped against the chill, Gwion was rubbing over the white pony’s coat with a twist of straw. Cynfal watched him for a moment, enjoying the graceful movements and the content look on the faces of both man and beast. Gwion was whistling through his teeth, a simple tune to which, Cynfal knew, there were some very scandalous words. Cynfal waited until the stanza was finished then cleared his throat and stepped out into the cold. It was wet under foot and the sky was heavy with clouds but it didn’t feel like rain.

“Good morning,” he said and took a sip from the porage bowl. “You make a good breakfast. Thank you.”

Gwion had coloured when he heard his voice and ducked his head in a sharp nod before replying. “Morning,” he said. “I did Otter already. Your turn tomorrow.”

Cynfal grinned and went to take the wisp, his hand engulfing Gwion’s to caress his cold fingers. “My pony, by your courtesy, so my responsibility. I’m sorry I slept in. I’m not used to such late nights.”

Gwion met his gaze then, cheeks flaming and Cynfal thought he might speak, but he gave up the wisp without a struggle and went to pick up a saddle.

Cynfal sighed. So that would be the way of it – what happened between the covers was their secret. So be it. Nobody who looked at either of them today – Gwion had a whole new set to his shoulders – could fail to guess the best of it.

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Thanks, darlings. It has been fun.

 

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Six Sunday

SSS AFR

Sunday again. Yes, this means another six sentences drawn from – well, something or another from me and a variety of excellent and rivetting fiction from other authors all over the place. The list of the other authors can be found here. Give it a click and you will be transported to distant planets, faraway places and times, and read about what goes on there. Have a go – it’s fun.

My six? Last week Cynfal and Gwion were in a very compromising position that was likely to get sweaty. Obviously, I can’t carry on with that [because it’s the only sex scene in the book and it seems a pity to ‘spoil’ it], so I’m skipping about 12 sentences and picking it up the next morning:

His waking in the morning was later than normal and far warmer, though there was a scratchy and dry patch under his hip that he frowned over before remembering where he was and what he had done. He opened his eyes to find that the other half of the bed was empty – had been empty long enough for all but the last traces of warmth to have faded.

The bothy was empty of Gwion too but the fire had been made up, there was a cup and a bowl on the floor beside it and outside he heard the swish of a tail and jingle of a bit.

Cynfal felt a little disappointed – it would have been nice to wake up with a warm armful and reassuring to see Gwion’s bright smile. But this – maybe it was better this way? Maybe Gwion needed to keep his distance while he came to terms with the fact that no, he wasn’t actually dead and yes, he could take some pleasure in another without clouding his memory of Llif?

I’ve started writing A Fierce Reaping again. I get up at about 6 and manage about 300 words before the alarm goes off and the proper day begins. I’ll do better when it’s lighter [and a good bit warmer] in the mornings and I can get my brain fired up earlier. But next week I’ll start posting something different. I’ve had one vote for pirates, but I can offer historical fantasy, high fantasy, or Regency romance parody. Any ideas?

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comfy chairMy guest today in the Comfy Chair is Rebecca Cohen, author of historical and fantasy stories with a male male romance theme. Her first published story, Captain Merric, appeared in Crossbones, an anthology of pirate tales from Dreamspinner, and as you can imagine I was all over that. 🙂 Since then she has published more short stories, one of which appeared in the UK Meet anthology Lashings of Sauce, her first novel, a fantasy entitled Servitude, and her second novel, The Actor and the Earl, set in Elizabethan England. More recently she has also published a unique and important co-written piece – her son. Congratulations to Rebecca and Mr Rebecca!

Many thanks for agreeing to inhabit my Comfy Chair and answer my questions.

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Elin: As mentioned above, you have written both historical and fantasy fiction. What is the particular draw of those genres? Is there any genre that you wouldn’t attempt?

Rebecca: I’m a geek, of both science and history so the fantasy and historical genres push my buttons like no tomorrow! I studied biochemical engineering as a post-grad and I love to try and write about science, particularly biology, in a different way. In Servitude, Lornyc is trying to discover his powers, and he is scientist, and I tried to explain his magic though his scientific view.

In term of history, I have always loved the Tudor and Stuart era. Although I love a good regency story as the next reader, I wanted to see different periods of history for my romance, so it was only natural I turned to the period I love.

As for a genre I wouldn’t attempt… tricky, as I’m not one to say never as who knows how inspiration will take, but I’m not really a fan of westerns/cowboys.

Elin: The 16th century was a hotbed of innovation that laid the foundations for earth shaking events – colonisation of the Americas, civil war in England, changes in religion and politics. What one thing excites you most about it? Or two. Well as many as you like really. I don’t think I could choose just one.

Rebecca: The politics of the Tudor period, and the machinations of the Tudor family themselves are absolutely fascinating. Politics and religion were so intimately tied together that it almost impossible to separate them. Basically the Tudors were real bastards, and life at court must have been one hell of ride. In addition, the spectacle must have been something to see. The rich folk of the time dressed sumptuously and like something out of a fairy tale. Elizabeth I was known to move her court from residence to residence, and I imagine that would have been an amazing sight to watch.

Elin: I very much enjoy historical research for its own sake but authors have to be wary of putting in too much detail. What’s the best bit of information that you discovered that didn’t make it into The Actor and the Earl? Likewise for Captain Merric?

Rebecca:I did a lot research around the day to day life and pastimes of the Elizabethans. I did use some of them in The Actor and the Earl, but there is only so much you can include without sounding like history textbook. And I’ve kept back a couple of couple prime examples (duelling and dancing!) for the sequel Duty to the Crown (Feb/Mar release). Also, life at court was a fascinating tale… I haven’t gone into the interaction of Queen Elizabeth and her favourite courtiers, but she was known to flirt outrageously with men, but also she had a terrible temper – she would throw thing and spit at his courtiers if they displeased her!

For Captain Merric, I learnt far more about the British Navy and pirate ships than I could use. Life at sea was harsh, and many men died at the hand of the hands of the barber surgeon or accident for gunpowder on board. The medical ‘care’ was extremely basic. The thought of quarterizing a wound in hot tar still turns my stomach.

Elin: Do you have a crisp mental picture of your characters or are they more a thought and a feeling than an image?

Rebecca: I get a general idea of what a character looks like, especially my main characters, but they’re not usually based on anyone in particular. An exception here is Anthony Crofton from The Actor and the Earl, in my head at least, looks like Robert Dudley (1st earl Leicester). Although I was in Starbucks in London and a young man walked in and he was what I imagined Lornyc (from Servitude) would look like it… it took all my will power not to take a photo with my phone.

Elin: Are you a plotter or a pantser? By which I mean to you outline your work first and try to follow the story arc you have planned or do you start writing and see where the characters take you?

Rebecca: Plotter all the way – in fact, I don’t feel comfort writing a story without having written the skeleton outline first! I’m the kind of writer who believes that they are in control of their characters and not the other way around, so they are kept in line by knowing the plot they will inhabit. That’s not to say I know every detail and story kink, because where would the fun be in that?

Elin: I was gutted not to be able to attempt Nanowrimo this year. Have you ever tried it? If so, how did you get on? If not, why not?

Rebecca: I’ve never attempted Nanowrimo, and I must admit it doesn’t hold much appeal for me. While I can see how it would works for others, I feel I’d just end up with 50000 words of drivel that would take much longer to fix than the month it took to write. How I write, I tend to end up with a fairly complete, and clean(ish) first draft, I doubt I could manage that doing the Nanowrimo approach.

Elin: We all have our favourites. If you walked into your library and found water pouring down the wall [it happened to me last month @_@] which book would you grab and move to safety and which would you happily consign to papier-mache?

Rebecca: Making History by Stephen Fry is one my absolute favourites so would be grabbed straightway. And I’d be using the Lord of the Rings Trilogy to mop up the water and protect my Terry Pratchett hardback collection.

Elin: What are you working on at the moment? assuming you have a moment to think between feeds and nappy changes 🙂

Rebecca: I’ve just completed the first round edits for Duty to the Crown (the sequel to the Actor and the Earl) which is due for release in Feb/Mar. I pretty much wrote those two novels back to back last year.
I also have a number of WIPs at the moment. The sequel to Servitude, working title Idolatry, is about a third done, and I’ve just finished the first draft a magical realism-esque novella. And I have also just started a sci-fi novel based at the British government ministry that deals with extra-terrestrial visitors – think a very British version of Men In Black with less guns more tea and biscuits!
And I have an urge to write a romance based at the court of Charles II – a restoration comedy… but that one will have to wait.

Elin: Could we please have an example of something?

Rebecca: Here’s a pre-publication extract from Duty to the Crown:

The evening air was stale, the warmth of summer a claustrophobic blanket across the city, stifling the back streets that sprawled behind the Globe Theatre. Sebastian weaved through the short-tempered mass of people annoyed by the heat and the pungent smell. He was hot, too, hidden as he was under his heavy traveling cloak, but being dressed as a man was nowhere near as uncomfortable as being Bronwyn. Sebastian had slipped away from Anthony at the end of the play, pressing a note into his hand and smirking before disappearing into the throng of theatergoers.
A couple of tankards of wine had steeled his courage and helped to while away enough time for the evening to set in properly. Long shadows appeared in the wider alleys and in the others, where the sun hardly penetrated even at midday, it was now almost dark. These were the alleys Sebastian was interested in, their darkness a perfect cover for his plan. It was the kind of place Sebastian had frequented only on very rare occasions when he’d lived in London, having been warned off by the tales the other actors had told of cutthroats and pickpockets lurking around every corner. He checked that his dagger was close at hand before heading into the warren of little alleys where London’s least salubrious inhabitants would perpetrate the most disreputable deeds.
Sebastian didn’t stop to worry about what went on behind the closed doors of the buildings on this street; he had no wish to be seen as a nosey passerby and ultimately a body that would need to be disposed of. He rounded the corner briskly, relieved to enter a better-lit area where the local water pump was situated, grateful that he’d found the place he’d been searching for without getting lost.
There were three women gathered outside a bright red door, standing provocatively to show as much of their impressive bosoms as possible. A young man, probably a few years Sebastian’s junior, with wild brown hair sat on the pump’s pedestal, his long legs out in front of him and leaning back as if on display. One of the women, her age obscured by heavy makeup, was talking to a man dressed in expensive, fashionable clothes, whose face was hidden by the brim of a wide hat. Sebastian’s appearance made the other two women, also wearing heavy makeup and low necklines, preen to get his attention, one pouting almost comically while the second leaned forward to flash her cleavage and play with her hair. The young man jumped to his feet as he saw Sebastian approach, but his interest in Sebastian was sidetracked when the gentleman talking to the first woman called him over, and the three of them entered the house with the red door together.
Sebastian hung back as two more men arrived from different alleys and the two remaining women beckoned them over, and after exchanging a few words, led them inside the house, leaving Sebastian on his own. He prayed he wouldn’t have to wait long; his fingers curled around the hilt of his dagger unprompted. Taking off the traveling cloak, he laid it on the pedestal of the water pump, then, checking all the possible approaches, leaned against the pump in a way he hoped would come across as alluring. Sebastian was dressed in a set of clothing on which the tailor had done an amazing job of complementing his build, and he knew that he should make an attractive figure.
The bells of a nearby church rang out, telling the city it was eight o’clock. Footsteps approached, and Sebastian’s heart began to beat rapidly in his chest. The shadow preceded the man, and resplendent in his favorite dark red doublet, Earl Anthony Crofton arrived. He grinned as he saw Sebastian, his eyes raking slowly down Sebastian’s lean frame. Sebastian pushed off the water pump and sauntered forward, with a deliberate sway to hips.
“Are you lost, sir? Perhaps I can help.”
“Oh, I am sure your services would be very welcome, but it is not directions I am after,” replied Anthony, standing only inches away.
Sebastian leaned in close to whisper in Anthony’s ear. “There are many things I can offer, sir. Do you have anything particular in mind?”
“That would depend.”
“On what?”
“On whether I can buy you for an hour or a whole night, and if you have somewhere we can go.”
Sebastian bit the inside of his cheek to keep his moan caused by Anthony’s words and the heat in his eyes under his breath. “I have a room at a nearby tavern.”
“Then you can consider yourself bought for the night.”

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Many thanks, Rebecca for answering, my questions and good luck with your writing.

Buy links for Actor and the Earl:
DSP: http://www.dreamspinnerpress.com/store/product_info.php?products_id=3429&cPath=55_462

Amazon:

Rebecca’s author pages at DSP: http://www.dreamspinnerpress.com/store/index.php?cPath=55_462

Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/rebecca.cohen.710

Blog: http://rebecca-cohen.livejournal.com/

Twitter: https://twitter.com/R_Cohen_writes

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