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janesMy guest today is an author for whose work I have huge affection – partly because he sometimes writes about places I know and partly because he’s just so good!

He’s here today in celebration of the release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Austenesque stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome, Adam!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

I’ve always been intrigued by something Mrs Jennings says to Colonel Brandon in Sense and Sensibility, about how dull life will be with the two Miss Dashwoods absent:

“Lord! We shall sit and gape at one another as dull as two cats.”

Admittedly cats are not particularly entertaining when they’re asleep, but then no more is anybody else! In fact, I do wonder whether Miss Austen had her tongue firmly in her cheek at this point – and not for the first time, obviously – because anyone who has more than a passing acquaintance with cats will know that their lives are never dull, and nor are those of the people they look after. If they’re not exploring where they shouldn’t be, or kindly tidying up cotton reels or corks or other small objects, then cats are almost certainly begging for attention by getting between humans and their work. I’m sure Jane worked in a room with the door shut and didn’t allow interruptions of any sort, but it’s irresistible to imagine her working away on her ‘bit of ivory’ – perhaps describing Elizabeth Bennet’s fine eyes – when some tabby monster with no manners jumps up, sticks its tail up her nose, and demands to be fed. No, Mrs Jennings, I’m afraid I won’t allow it; you and Colonel Brandon may have to make your own entertainment for a while, to be sure, but cats are very rarely dull at all!

Regency gent sits on cat while lady looks on in horror

“Miseries of Human Life: squatting plump on an unsuspected cat in your chair.” 1808

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

The relationship between Emma Woodhouse and Harriet Smith has always intrigued me; it’s a mentor/mentee relationship, but Emma herself is still very young – although she has had a good upbringing from Miss Taylor and is certainly mature for her age in many ways. Harriet, on the other hand, is young and has perhaps been over-protected. In a bizarre way, it’s almost the same sort of dynamic (I use the word advisedly!) as that between Bruce Wayne and Dick Grayson; the older and wiser character ‘adopting’ the younger and more vulnerable one. I also think the very unfixed quality of Harriet’s emotions – she staggers about from one unsuitable crush to another – together with Emma’s own determination not to marry, allows for the intriguing possibility that in the right set of circumstances they might even fall in love with each other, and the comparatively recent precedent of the ‘Ladies of Llangollen’ would at least allow them not to feel quite so alienated by the discovery as might otherwise have been the case.

Here’s Emma, the morning after Mr Elton’s proposal, telling Harriet what’s occurred!

“Harriet, my dear, you must prepare for a disappointment,” she began. “Mr Elton is gone from Highbury – and gone, I am afraid, quite out of countenance with me; I have offended him too far and too greatly soon to be recovered from, I think.”
Harriet’s astonishment was great, and her foremost inclination to demur. “Oh! – but I’m certain you could never – I mean, Miss Woodhouse, surely it must be impossible – ” However she was unable to reconcile denial of her friend’s guilt with the discourtesy of rejecting her confession altogether, and stumbled inarticulately into silence. “I am sorry indeed to hear it,” she continued, recovering. “I am confident there must have been a misunderstanding. I cannot believe that you had any intention of offending him.”
“Oh, but I did!” exclaimed Emma, warmly. “When I learned what it was he wanted, I said whatever I could to prevent him speaking to me any further. He had asked, you see – He had asked me if I would be his wife.”
“Good heavens!” It was the strongest expression ever to have passed Harriet’s mild lips, provoked as it was by astonishment rather than sorrow or despair. “Oh, but it demonstrates such excellent judgement on his part; indeed, I would hardly have thought him equal to it!”
Taken aback at this response, Emma could say little to the purpose but “Indeed, Harriet? Surely what it demonstrates is ambition coupled with an absence of refinement?” She explained to her friend how Mr Elton had intruded himself upon her in her carriage after visiting the Westons at Randalls, and how he had declared himself in love with her and evidently expected her to demonstrate a similar devotion in return.
“But if he loves you – ?” began Harriet, and then could find no words with which to continue.
“If he loved me,” said Emma, “the strength of my answer would surely have wounded him, but I believe he is not and has never been in love – except, perhaps, with himself! He is not a man of emotions, Harriet; he is calculating and entirely concerned with his own advancement, and he thought a few syrupy words and hackneyed sentiments would induce me to accept him. He was too presumptuous, too forward, and esteems me too little if he imagines I can be taken in by such obvious hypocrisy! It does him no credit that he thinks so meanly of me – or indeed of any woman else!”

What are you working on at present?

The sad answer to that is ‘very little’. I’m doing some research for a project which has been languishing in my files for many years and really ought to be revived, and which I hope to be able to pull together in time for publication in 2017, and I’ve also got a short story bubbling under for another Manifold Press anthology project, the details of which are due to be announced shortly. I’ve been going through a very bad spell with my writing lately, and I’ve found it difficult to concentrate on anything for long enough to make any appreciable progress. I haven’t given up, however, and I have loads of lovely people cheering me on; it’s just all taking a great deal longer than I would really like it to, I’m afraid

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

janesMy guest today is an author whose work I adore, and she also gives some of the best hugs around. 🙂

Welcome Julie!!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?
For me, Jane Austen’s brilliance isn’t about any “high astounding terms” as with Marlowe’s Tamburlaine. It’s more that she has a very clear eye and sharp mind when observing herself and others, and a very precise and concise way of using the English language. Not to mention her delightfully dry wit.
I have a couple of examples here from her letters: “What dreadful hot weather we have! It keeps one in a continual state of inelegance.” I freely admit to being inelegant at the best of times, but I hate hot weather, and Austen’s words immediately remind me of that frumpy, inescapable sense of discomfort it always brings.
Here are her thoughts on decorating her hat: “I cannot help thinking that it is more natural to have flowers grow out of the head than fruit.” You can just hear the dry ironic tones choosing the lesser of two absurdities.
And a last one, expressing quite the opposite of the usual sentiment: “Our little visitor has just left us, and left us highly pleased with her; she is a nice, natural, open-hearted, affectionate girl, with all the ready civility which one sees in the best children in the present day; so unlike anything that I was myself at her age, that I am often all astonishment and shame.” Her more acerbic judgements of those around her are often quoted, so here is a nice one to balance them out!

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

When I was writing the call for submissions, I tried to come up with some ideas that might provoke my fellow authors into writing a story. One of them was “What if Elinor Dashwood was repressing her love not for Edward but for a woman?” – and while I’d been hoping to write something dealing with the rambunctious heroines of the Juvenilia, the idea about Elinor was the one that made it into print.
The story is basically a retelling of Sense and Sensibility, with brother-in-law Edward Ferrars swapped out for cousin-in-law Ada Ferrars. And this is how it starts, with me cunningly borrowing and adapting some of Austen’s best lines:

“It is enough,” said Mrs Dashwood. “To say that Ada is unlike Fanny is enough. It implies everything amiable. I love her already.”
Elinor smiled at her mother’s warm response, so typical of her enthusiasms. “I think you will like Ada, when you know more of her.”
“You love her, Elinor,” said Marianne. Her look expressed her full meaning more fervently than her tone. “You love Ada already.”
Elinor glanced at Marianne to acknowledge the truth that the sisters had never shared with their mother, but she responded honestly when she said, “I cannot deny that I greatly esteem her.”

What are you working on at present?

Well! I haven’t really talked about this a great deal, as it is an odd little project that I fear no one will want to read except me.
One of my Favourite Ever experiences in the theatre was seeing the play The Knight of the Burning Pestle by Francis Beaumont performed at the Sam Wanamaker Playhouse (the beautiful indoor theatre at Shakespeare’s Globe in London). It is a hilarious play, and surprisingly (even shockingly) post-modern. It features two plays within a play.
My idea was to wrap another layer around the play’s layers, and write about a modern-day performance, including the actors and what happens backstage as well as ‘novelising’ the play itself.
If I can persuade Manifold Press to publish it, I hope you’ll see it in the first half of next year!

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Bio:

Julie Bozza is an English-Australian hybrid who is fuelled by espresso, calmed by knitting, unreasonably excited by photography, and madly in love with John Keats.

Links:

Blog: http://juliebozza.com/
Twitter: https://twitter.com/juliebozza
Goodreads: https://www.goodreads.com/juliebozza

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

janesMy guest today is new-to-me-author Fae Mcloughlin who, I believe, is enjoying her debut in this terrific anthology.

She is here today to help my celebrate A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Austenesque stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome Fae.


Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

I love Jane Austen’s descriptions and use of metaphors. This account of Pemberley House is a favourite; I particularly like the stream that is full of its own self-importance.

“It was a large, handsome stone building, standing well on rising ground, and backed by a ridge of high woody hills; and in front, a stream of some natural importance was swelled into greater, but without any artificial appearance. Its banks were neither formal nor falsely adorned.”

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

I knew that I wanted to set Thirteen Hours in Austen in modern times and that I wanted to write about a fictional Austen museum at night. I’ve always wanted to spend a night in a museum, to wander the corridors alone and really get a feel of the exhibits, instead of dodging kids, pushchairs, and the people that read every word and don’t move on. So I took a uninterested young lad and an exuberant cos-player and let them have an empty museum adventure.

He flounced in front of me like a drunken ballerina, all arms and out-of-control legs, forcing me to retreat against the brickwork. ‘But, like Mr Wickham I’m charming, an excellent conversationalist, and possess a gift for making friends. Unlike him, I’m not wicked, although sometimes it might be fun to be so,’ he said and winked.
I smiled. There was something appealing about the nineteenth-century soldier amongst rubbish of the twenty-first. I held out my hand. ‘Ashley, Ash.’
‘Hello Ashleyash, I’m Mr Wickham.’ He clicked his heels and shook my hand with a surprisingly firm handshake.
‘No, you’re not.’
‘Okay, I’m Noah and you’re still out of bounds.’
I took one last draw on the e-cig then said, ‘Don’t worry, I’m off.’
‘What is that?’ Noah pointed towards the vaporiser.
‘Um, an electronic cigarette. Have you not seen one before?’
‘No. Why do you smoke that and not a real cigarette?’
Did he live under a rock? ‘Erm, for health reasons.’ I turned to leave.
He caught my arm and there was urgency to the grip. ‘Did you dress up today? It’s the museum’s most popular activity.’
I pulled away. ‘Nope. I’d rather stick pins in my eyes.’
‘Oh, you’re out of luck, the wardrobe department has run out of pins.’
‘Ha-ha.’ I turned towards the door.
A red jacket filled my vision and blocked the way. ‘Why are you here if you hate Austen so much?’ Noah asked.
‘My mother dragged me along on some kind of parent/child bonding thing.’
Noah leaned in, he smelt of mints and brass polish, and his breathing was quick and low. ‘I bet you a week’s wage I can make you fall in love with Austen before the night’s out,’ he murmured.
‘My week’s wage wouldn’t buy a novelty eraser from your shop.’
‘If they are your thing then my week’s wage would buy you a thousand.’ He waited, his eyes round, and his lips parted.
The only people who spend a night at the museum are boffins and Ben Stiller. It was lunacy, but I said, ‘What the hell. Nothing to lose—’
‘—and a lot to gain.’ Noah took my hand.

What are you working on at present?

At present, I’m researching Spitfires, particularly how you eject from one, so I can contribute towards Manifold’s WW2 anthology – Call to Arms.

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Bio:

Writing is my first love but my other passion is photography, in particular taking pictures of big skies, random cloud formations, plane trails, sunsets, rainbows, and the weather.

When I’m not tapping on a keyboard or standing on my garage roof taking pictures of the sunrise, I like to make perfectly smooth ice balls and plink them into Jack Daniels.

You can follow Fae on Twitter @FaeMcloughlin

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

janesMy guest today is an author who I have met a couple of times at UK Meet and I can’t wait to meet again..

She is here today in celebration of the recent release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Jane Austen themed stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome Sam!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

I have a favorite quote which I was ‘given’ by a friend in 2003. I was going through a rough patch and she sent me a card with this handwritten inside.

It isn’t what we say or think what defines us but what we do – Sense and Sensibility

I think that then it was perfect and still is.

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

The inspiration behind my story in the anthology (and which also answers question 1) is the one below. I studied P&P at university so when I returned to my copy earlier this year this line was highlighted. It obviously stood out then as much as it does now. All I needed to do was add a Soap Actor, a celebrity dancing competition, a pair of breeches and Colin Firth and the was born.

To be fond of dancing was a certain step towards falling in love – Pride and Prejudice

What are you working on at present?

Currently I am taking a small break from writing. I have had a tough year physically and with the exception of Cross and Cast I haven’t worked on very much. I think I’ve needed to heal mentally and physically. After a little bit of encouragement at the UK meeting in September my aim for 2017 is to plan out my Rugby League story and see where things go after that.

Elin: and I can’t wait to read it. Please let us know how you get on.

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

janesMy guest today is an author whose short stories delighted in A Pride of Poppies and whose first novel, Submerge, was released on the first of November.

She is here today in celebration of the recent release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Jane Austen themed stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome Ellie!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

There’s a wonderful sentence in Sense & Sensibility that I always think sums up a lot very concisely: “Elinor agreed to it all, for she did not think he deserved the compliment of rational opposition.” I also love Edward Ferrars’ assertion that “Shyness is only the effect of a sense of inferiority in some way or other. If I could persuade myself that my manners were perfectly easy and graceful, I should not be shy.” I can relate! And, of course, there is that wonderful speech of Darcy’s in Pride & Prejudice.“In vain have I struggled. It will not do. […] You must allow me to tell you how ardently I admire and love you.”

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

This sort of question always makes me wish I hadn’t written two stories! But only for a moment. So if you don’t mind, I’ll take each one separately.

Margaret actually evolved from my first idea when I saw the brief – I like to stay more or less canon-compliant (if you squint a bit) so I wanted to take a look at the Dashwood sister who didn’t get much page-time in Sense & Sensibility, which is my favourite of Austen’s novels. I wrote my other story while I was trying to iron out the details of this one, and then suddenly it came to me that Colonel Brandon was the answer to all my prayers. And he turned out to be useful in the story, as well!

Extract from Margaret:

“Have you raised the idea of a companion with your ward yet, Colonel?”
He sat back a little in his seat, looking almost embarrassed. “No. I mean to do so within the next few days, but I haven’t yet worked out how best to broach the subject. I confess, I am rather afraid that if I wound her pride, she won’t come at all.”
Margaret did not pry into the reasons behind his expression, which spoke of real grief and fear; instead, she set about trying to relieve his anxiety. “Well, I think I know a way you can suggest it without causing any offence. As it happens, I might soon be in need of companionship myself; perhaps you would be so kind as to ask a young lady of your acquaintance if she might oblige, as a very great favour?”
“Well, that could hardly cause offence,” the Colonel conceded, “but how could I then explain the substitution of another girl in your place?”
“Well, unless you think me unsuitable, I don’t believe you would have to make any such substitution. I have not consulted with my mother yet, but I would be happy to act as companion to your ward if she agrees.”

Father Doesn’t Dance started life as a companion piece to Pride & Prejudice, which would run alongside the events of the original novel, with a few differences! That quickly spiralled far beyond the word count for the anthology – and I’m hoping I can develop it separately at some point. For A Certain Persuasion, though, I decided to take the story back in time, to the death of Darcy’s father, and I think it turned out much better that way.

Extract from Father Doesn’t Dance:

As the weeks went by, Lavinia could only watch as her father became more frail and his expression became more worried. She could hardly blame him for his preoccupation; she imagined that losing one’s health so quickly was quite difficult enough without having to contend with the knowledge of an entail that would leave one’s family, if not destitute, considerably less comfortable than one would wish. Lavinia hated to see her father so disconsolate, and so she began to rack her brain for some brilliant scheme that might make him happy. When at last the idea occurred, it was such a preposterous notion that she discarded it immediately, but the thought would not leave her. At last, she knocked on the door of her father’s study, where she was increasingly likely to find both parents closeted together.
“I’ve been thinking,” she told them once the door was closed behind her, “about the entail.”
“You needn’t worry yourself about that, Lavinia. There’s nothing to be done,” her mother began in a soothing tone, but Lavinia turned her head to address her father.
“Has Mr Lowick found the heir yet?”
“No. No, he hasn’t.” Perhaps he noticed the glint in her eye, because he raised an eyebrow as he continued. “If I had a son, it would be quite a different matter. Nothing could be simpler. But with so few men left in my family … well, it’s a little harder to trace the line of succession.”
Lavinia took a deep breath. “What if you did have a son?”

What are you working on at present?

As ever, I have my fingers in several pies – my first novel, Submerge, was released on the same day as A Certain Persuasion and I’m already working on a potential sequel to that, as well asFather Didn’t Dance, the continuation of Father Doesn’t Dance. At the time of writing, however, it is November, which for me means NaNoWriMo, so I’ve put both of those on hold and started something completely different – a novel set in Cambridge in the ’50s, following a fictitious scientist through a short period of his life. So far, I’ve written about a sixth of the story I had in mind, and around half of my intended word count, so we’ll see how that goes when the time comes to edit!

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Bio:

Eleanor Musgrove was born in a seaside town on the South Coast of England, where she developed a love of writing when she was very young. Other ambitions – and homes – have come and gone, but she has always wanted to be an author. After lots of practice, both through writing fan fiction and through participating in NaNoWriMo (National Novel Writing Month) most years, SUBMERGE is her first novel. She’s pretty excited about it!
When she’s not writing or reading, Eleanor enjoys going to the theatre, walks in the woods, and getting far too emotionally invested in films and TV shows. She graduated from the University of Kent in 2014 with a BSc in Multimedia Technology and Design, and hopes to one day put it to good use.
If you’d like to keep up with Eleanor’s writing journey, or let her know what you think of her book, she keeps a blog at eamusgrove.wordpress.com.

Links:
eamusgrove.wordpress.com
facebook.com/eamusgrovewrites

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

janes

My guest today is new-to-me author Lou Faulkner, another author based in the antipodes, and I’m looking forward very much to getting to know her and her work.

She is here today in celebration of the recent release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Jane Austen themed stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome, Lou!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

Short of saying, “Just go and read everything!” I can think of no way of doing justice to Jane Austen’s command of the English language. But I love the instances where she nails a concept or two in a couple of words, like Anne Elliot’s dread of the “white glare” of Bath in the heats of September, or Mrs. Jenning’s opinion of Nancy Steele as “no conjurer”. That’s the fine brush in incomparable action on the little bit of ivory.

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

Persuasion has been my favourite of her novels ever since I got over the sheer dazzlement of Pride and Prejudice. Given Jane’s vigorous endorsement of the landscape near Lyme, and my own memories of walking part of the South West Coastal Path, including a day’s march through the weird landscape of the Undercliff, the choice of setting was inevitable. Then there was the allure of writing two disreputable characters, which I thoroughly enjoyed!

Fortunately, the inn prepared its set dinner to coincide with the arrival of the coach. William and Musgrove were shown to a table by the window, through which William observed with amusement that Mary Anning was studying Musgrove’s fossils with a magnifying lens.
“Your expedition was successful! I think your prizes have met with favour.”
“A midshipman needs all the prizes he can lay hands on!” said Musgrove. “The King’s Service don’t pay well for us lowly fellows. It’ll take more than a sea-fight or two for me to set up my carriage; the captain has the lion’s share of the profits of any action, and any admiral within sight may claim a portion. Still, it’s a living, when all’s said and done – and there’s less study than being a parson, or a lawyer.”
“As it happens, I’m a lawyer myself.” William observed with amusement how Musgrove mentally reviewed his words to ascertain that he had not been disparaging, and on satisfying himself of this, took a sip of coffee to cover the awkward gap in his conversation. “But I agree with you about the study that is necessary. No longer for me, though; my wife and I have a more leisurely existence. At the end of the week I will meet her in London; she is visiting old friends at the moment.” Now why did he suddenly feel the need to mention his wife? But a little truth was easier to maintain than a wholesale lie, any lawyer knew that, and at some point soon, perhaps, he would reveal that he saw no need for strict – or even any – fidelity.
Indeed, this information was met with a guffaw. “So you’re off the leash for a few days, then?”
William poured himself more coffee. “I am indeed off the leash.”

What are you working on at present?

At present I’m working on a naval action-adventure, set during the middle of the eighteenth century. I wanted to write a sea-fight, and it got out of hand. This was a time when the mastery of the seas hung in the balance between French and English – and it was the Enlightenment, so all sorts of other interesting things were going on as well. There’s such a lot to play with in that period!

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Author’s bio:

I live in a little house with a big garden in the far south of the world, and most of my life has revolved around books: reading them, selling them, lending them out and, more recently, writing them. Apart from bibliophilia, I’ve done a variety of different things, including years learning falconry, and I enjoy hands-on pursuits that might give me material for my stories: blacksmithing, sailing and flying. I will attempt things in my writer’s persona that I would never contemplate as myself; this does not, however, extend to bungy-jumping.

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

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My guest today is new-to-me Australia based author Narrelle Harris, who writes crime and paranormal stories in addition to romance and brand new adventures for Sherlock Holmes and John Watson. I’m looking forward very much to getting to know her and her work.

She is here today in celebration of the recent release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Jane Austen themed stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome Narrelle!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

I’ve always been amused/horrified by how much Mr and Mrs Bennett reminded me of my own parents, and the way Mr Bennett teased the missus before retiring to the library is a very elegant version of aspects of my childhood!

“Mr. Bennet, how can you abuse your own children in such a way? You take delight in vexing me. You have no compassion for my poor nerves.”
“You mistake me, my dear. I have a high respect for your nerves. They are my old friends. I have heard you mention them with consideration these last twenty years at least.”
“Ah, you do not know what I suffer.”
“But I hope you will get over it, and live to see many young men of four thousand a year come into the neighbourhood.”
“It will be no use to us, if twenty such should come, since you will not visit them.”
“Depend upon it, my dear, that when there are twenty, I will visit them all.”

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology?

I’d been reading some posts about bi erasure and when Julie sent the call out for submissions I thought it might work as a crux point for a retelling of Persuasion with a modern context.

May we have an excerpt?

“Come to my book group with me on Thursday, Coop,” Kate told her melancholy new flatmate.
Cooper sighed and shook his head, resisting the inevitable.
“C’mon,” she wheedled. “You’ve been lying around the flat like a depressed slug for eight weeks. So it didn’t work out with Ruby.”
Cooper grunted.
“Or with Shen, or that boy with the mohawk,” she added, “or … Helena wasn’t it, before that, and Mandy? They were about the same time, anyway, and before that Isla, Poppy … ”
He grunted again. More of a snarl, really.
“Okay, so you’ve had a run of miserable luck. Shake it off. Read a book, eat something with vitamins in it, have a fucking bath, spritz up your sad hair and come out with me on Thursday. We’re reading Jane Austen this month.”
Cooper made a noise like it was the end of the world, and the end-times smelled like cheap dog food. “Aren’t you meant to make this sound appealing?”
“What’s not appealing about Austen, you cretin?”
“It’s all fucking bonnets and county balls.”
“Shows what you know,” Kate sneered back. “It’s all sass and snark, though I will admit there are bonnets. And you like balls, don’t you? As well as boobies?”
“Ha fucking ha.”
“No, really Coop. You smell like a school bathroom. Scrub up, pull on your glad rags and come to book club. You could meet a lovely girl. Or a lovely boy. With or without bonnets. Besides, if you don’t, I won’t have anyone to be my wingman at the club after. And I need a wingman.”
“You said I had a face like a wet week and to stay the hell away from you when you were on the pull.”
“That was last week. This week I need a wingman. So get up you lazy, mopey sod, and read this.” She tossed a pre-loved paperback at him, “And gird your loins for Captain Wentworth. He’s hot. Imagine Hugh Jackman in tight breeches.”
Cooper took up the copy of Persuasion and leafed through the first few pages. “All right,” he said, unenthusiastically, “I’ll come to your book group. I’ll even wash.”
“That’s the spirit,” said Kate, with a little air punch. She grinned, then sobered at Cooper’s frown. “Really, Coop,” she said, “it’ll be good.”
Cooper smiled at her, giving her some crumb of effort in exchange for hers.
His cousin patted his shoulder and it made him want to weep.
“Are you ever going to tell me what happened? I mean … you came back with one bloody suitcase, and Ruby sent four boxes over, and that was it. Most of your stuff was still here in your room. My spare room.” She shook her head. “Your room. You never really moved in with her, did you? That was the problem.”
Cooper looked at his feet. “It was a manifestation of the problem.”
“Want to talk about it?”
“No.”
“Is it about what happened when you came out to your mum and dad?” Which was why Cooper now lived in Kate’s spare room on such a regular basis.
“Before then. But. I don’t want to talk about it. I messed up. I ran away because I was scared of losing everything, and lost it anyway when I stopped pretending I wasn’t bi. So.” He shrugged. “I’ll get over it.”
Kate stooped to kiss his forehead. “You’re a good guy, Coop. You’ve got a good heart, and a good brain. It’ll get better.”
He nodded and smiled, more successfully than last time.
He was better than he’d been after abandoning Archer. He was better than he’d been after his family abandoned him. It would get better again. Not as good as it had been with Archer, but better.
It would.

What are you working on at present?

I’m writing a short Holmes-and-Watson story for an Australian anthology, and following that up with a Holmes-and-Watson adventure and also a Holmes/Watson romance for Clan Destine Press. I’m also cowriting a modern-era Holmes/Watson romance for Improbable Press, so I have plenty to keep me working for a while!

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Bio:

narrelle-m-harris-midNarrelle M Harris is a Melbourne-based writer of crime, horror, fantasy, romance, erotica and non-fiction. Her books include Fly By Night (nominated for a Ned Kelly Award for First Crime Novel), and fantasies Witch Honour and Witch Faith (both short-listed for the George Turner Prize).

In March 2012, her short story collection, Showtime, became the fifth of the 12 Planets series (released by World Fantasy Award-winning Twelfth Planet Press). Walking Shadows, the sequel to the Melbourne-based vampire novel The Opposite of Life, was released by Clan Destine Press in June 2012. Walking Shadows was nominated for the Chronos Awards for SF and fantasy, and shortlisted for the Davitt Awards for crime writing.
Narrelle also writes Sherlock Holmes adventures in Victorian-era and modern settings, with the first of these due out in late 2016.

colonialboy-ip-logoIn 2013, Narrelle also began writing short erotic romance, often combining romance with adventure/crime stories. Her first full-length romance, The Adventure of the Colonial Boy – a Holmes/Watson crime/romance set in Australia in 1893 – was published by Improbable Press in 2016. A queer paranormal romance novel and more short stories (both het and queer) are in the pipeline with Manifold Press, Clan Destine Press and Improbable Press. Find out more about Narrelle’s work at http://www.narrellemharris.com

Social Media:
Twitter: @daggyvamp
Facebook: https://www.facebook.com/NarrelleMHarris.Writing
Blog: http://www.mortalwords.com.au

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

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My guest today is new-to-me author Atlin Merrick, and I’m looking forward very much to getting to know her and her work.

She is here today in celebration of the recent release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Jane Austen themed stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome Atlin!

 

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

The Jane Austen quote I relish most is of course the single most famous line in all of English literature:

“It is a truth universally acknowledged that a single man in possession of a good fortune must be in want of a wife.”

I hadn’t expected to read Pride and Prejudice and yet one day I found myself holding the book while I waited for a friend to finish shopping. Bored, I opened to the first page and read that first line.

I never did notice the next fifteen minutes pass…

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

“Hide Nor Hair,” was inspired by a friend living a life of love and devotion with his one true love even though he came from a culture that said being transgender is wrong.

For me the most important part of my story is this truth I learned while writing it:

EXCERPT:

“Scandals are rare things, and the men and women who come to public notice for not conforming to society’s standards are but the smallest fraction of such people in this world. The reason we do not know of the others is that their stories are boring.

Beautiful and fine as the stories might be for those living them, people who are different in one way are nevertheless usually gloriously ordinary in most others.

Like Mary Hay and Adam Ashford Otelian, who married one year after they met and who went on to be so incredibly boring to most, that most never knew they were quite different.

That Mary had soft hands, fine cheekbones, the prettiest lips, as well as a penis: none of those things were what made her different really. And Adam’s gentle hands, the lovely curls he would keep well into old age, and the fact that his penis was very partial to his wife’s penis: those were not what made him different either.

No, what made the Otelians unusual to others was the couple’s quiet and constant devotion.”

What are you working on at present?

With Narrelle M Harris and Verity Burns I’m writing a mystery called God Save the Queen, which concerns a dastardly plot against Her Majesty, mendacious media moguls out to smear the reputation of Sherlock Holmes, and perhaps the most dangerous threat of all to the world’s only consulting detective: falling in love with his flatmate John Watson.

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BIO:

Atlin Merrick is the author of Sherlock Holmes and John Watson: The Night They Met and editor of the anthology A Murmuring of Bees, both through Improbable Press. As Wendy C. Fries she’s written hundreds of features on high tech, personal finance, and health and wellness. Atlin’s fascinated with theatre, London, and lattes.

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improbablepress.co.uk

https://twitter.com/AtlinMerrick

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A Certain PersuasionA Certain Persuasion

from Manifold Press

Thirteen stories from eleven authors, exploring the world of Jane Austen and celebrating her influence on ours.

Being cousins-by-marriage doesn’t deter William Elliot from pursuing Richard Musgrove in Lyme; nor does it prevent Elinor Dashwood falling in love with Ada Ferrars. Surprises are in store for Emma Woodhouse while visiting Harriet Smith; for William Price mentoring a seaman on board the Thrush; and for Adam Otelian befriending his children’s governess, Miss Hay. Margaret Dashwood seeks an alternative to the happy marriages chosen by her sisters; and Susan Price ponders just such a possibility with Mrs Lynd. One Fitzwilliam Darcy is plagued by constant reports of convictions for ‘unnatural’ crimes; while another must work out how to secure the Pemberley inheritance for her family.

Meanwhile, a modern-day Darcy meets the enigmatic Lint on the edge of Pemberley Cliff; while another struggles to live up to wearing Colin Firth’s breeches on a celebrity dance show. Cooper is confronted by his lost love at a book club meeting in Melbourne while reading Persuasion; and Ashley finds more than he’d bargained for at the Jane Austen museum in Bath.

A Pemberley-sized anthology featuring authors: Julie Bozza, Andrea Demetrius, Sam Evans, Lou Faulkner, Adam Fitzroy, Narrelle M Harris, Sandra Lindsey, Fae Mcloughlin, Atlin Merrick, JL Merrow and Eleanor Musgrove.

Available from Manifold Press | SmashwordsAmazon ARe

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My guest today is a much loved idol and mentor and a superlative author of British based comedy romance, touching historicals and some very creepy books with shifters. She has also written the world’s most appealing plumber.

I am speaking, of course, of J L Merrow, and she is here today in celebration of the recent release of A Certain Persuasion – an anthology of Jane Austen themed stories from Manifold Press.

Welcome JL!

Jane Austen’s grasp of the English language is justly celebrated. Is there any part that you can quote for us that you particularly relish?

Ancles. I just love the way she spells it. But I suppose that doesn’t really count, so how about this one:

“The whole of this unfortunate business,” said Dr Lyster, “has been the result of PRIDE and PREJUDICE. Your uncle, the Dean, began it, by his arbitrary will, as if an ordinance of his own could arrest the course of nature!”

  • Except, of course, that doesn’t count either; it is (as every serious Janeite will know) from near the end of Fanny Burney’s 1782 novel Cecilia, Memoirs of an Heiress.

So I guess I’ll have to go with this, from Mansfield Park, which more or less sums up my own approach to writing:

“Let other pens dwell on guilt and misery. I quit such odious subjects as soon as I can, impatient to restore everybody, not greatly in fault themselves, to tolerable comfort, and to have done with all the rest.”

What inspired your story in the A Certain Persuasion anthology? May we have an excerpt?

I’ve always been fascinated by the characters of Mary and Henry Crawford in Mansfield Park. In many ways, they’re far more appealing, especially to the modern reader, than the “real” heroine, Fanny Price. They’re lively while she’s quiet; confident while she’s fearful, active while she’s passive, and worldly in a modern way while she is a throwback to the fainting medieval damsels who were to be so beloved of the Pre-Raphaelites.

As I mention in my author’s notes in A Certain Persuasion, there are significant lesbian undercurrents in the relationship between Fanny and Mary. Perhaps Mary, like her brother Henry, was drawn to Fanny precisely because she was so very different to the Crawford siblings. I’m not sure, however, that such a fascination would form a strong foundation for a lasting love. To my mind, Fanny’s younger sister Susan—who takes her place at Mansfield Park after Fanny’s marriage to Edmund—has, with her “fearless disposition,” far more in common with Mary.

This excerpt from “A Particular Friend” shows Mary and Susan’s first meeting:

It was undoubtedly a fault, Mary reflected, to have retained at the staid old age of nine-and- twenty that playfulness, that lack of regard for consequences, which men found so captivating in a girl of nineteen. And yet, she could not help herself, nor indeed would she, if she could. Let others wait for old age to excuse their eccentricities; she would have what fun she might while still young enough to enjoy it.

And was it so very bad a sin, merely to introduce oneself to a young lady whose handsome face and tall figure had caught one’s eye across the pump room?

By no means, were it not that Mary needed no introduction to tell her this young lady’s name – and was, moreover, quite aware that the young lady’s family would not wish for the acquaintance. Mary felt her spirits lift with the prospect of mischief as she crossed the room with unhurried tread.

“Excuse me,” she said, directing her most charming smile at her fair quarry, who was presently engaged in fetching a glass of water. “But are you not Miss Susan Price, of Mansfield Park?”

Miss Price smiled back, an uncertain smile, but not a hesitant one. “I am indeed. But forgive me … ”

“Ah! No forgiveness is needed, I assure you. And how are you enjoying the waters?” Mary asked, inclining her head in the direction of the glass held by Miss Price. Amusement bubbled within her, but it would not do to let it show. “Or as I should rather say, how are you enjoying Bath? For I am quite sure nobody enjoys the waters.”

“I like Bath very well, thank you, and although I dare say you are correct about the waters, this glass is for my aunt.” Miss Price’s eyes showed her confusion, but she forged bravely on, Mary was delighted to see. “You are acquainted with my aunt, Lady Bertram?”

“Oh, yes, indeed. At least, I was formerly so. I regret to say we have not been greatly in contact, these past ten years. Tell me, how does your sister, Mrs Bertram?”

“Fanny? Oh, Fanny is very well.” A flush of colour suffused Miss Price’s cheek as she spoke with enthusiasm of her sister. “She is lately delivered of their second child, a fine, healthy boy. They have named him William, after his uncle.”

It was not often Mary surprised herself, but to her astonishment she found her pleasure at this news entirely untainted by jealousy. “I am so pleased to hear that. You will perhaps not know this, but at one time dear Fanny and I were quite intimate. I wonder if she still wears the gold chain I gave her?”

Miss Price took a breath, and appeared to straighten her back, although indeed her posture needed no correction. “Perhaps you would be so good as to tell me your name, so that when I write, I may remember you to her?”

“Oh, have I neglected to mention it? How very careless of me. But of course. I am Mrs Lynd – now widowed, alas. But formerly I was Mary Crawford, of Mansfield Parsonage.”

Miss Susan Price, it seemed, was made of sterner stuff than her elder sister. Her jaw did not drop; she did not swoon; her eyes widened but a fraction and her gasp was barely audible.

Nonetheless, as Mary inclined her head and glided away, she found herself entirely pleased with the consternation she had caused.

What are you working on at present?

I’ve got two novels in Riptide’s Porthkennack series in the pipeline: Wake Up Call and One Under (title TBC). Porthkennack is a fictional town in north Cornwall created by the very fertile imagination of Alex Beecroft, and I’ve thoroughly enjoyed playing in her sandbox (now, do not be suspecting me of a pun*!) My novels are both contemporary MM romances dealing with more serious themes than many of my books, and the first one is due out in April 2017.

For a total change of pace, I’m currently writing the fourth in my Shamwell Tales series of MM romantic comedies set in the (fictional) English village of Shamwell. For those who’ve read the third book, Out!, this one, provisionally titled Spun!, features two returning characters as the main couple: David and Rory. It’s a May-December, odd couple relationship, with David a very camp, out gay man and Rory discovering there’s more to his sexuality than he thought after the failure of his marriage. It’s due out in July 2017.

*Mary Crawford’s line, after she comments that “Of Rears and Vices, I saw enough.” Gotta love a girl who makes dirty jokes.

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BIO:

JL Merrow is that rare beast, an English person who refuses to drink tea.  She read Natural Sciences at Cambridge, where she learned many things, chief amongst which was that she never wanted to see the inside of a lab ever again.  Her one regret is that she never mastered the ability of punting one-handed whilst holding a glass of champagne.

JL Merrow is a member of the Romantic Novelists’ Association, International Thriller Writers, Verulam Writers and the UK GLBTQ Fiction Meet organising team.

Find JL Merrow online at: www.jlmerrow.com, on Twitter as @jlmerrow, and on Facebook at http://www.facebook.com/jl.merrow

JL Merrow is the author of “A Particular Friend” which appears in A Certain Persuasion, an anthology of stories set in and around the writings of Jane Austen, featuring LGBTQIA characters.

When Susan Price leaves Mansfield Park to accompany her aunt, Lady Bertram, to take the waters in Bath, she little expects to meet an old ‘friend’ of the family. Initially scandalised, Susan finds herself drawn to the former Mary Crawford, now a widow, Mrs Lynd.

Due out from Manifold Press 1 November 2016 SmashwordsAmazon ARe

 

 

 

 

I dunno – I guess I’ll stop this eventually but these notes have just sort of grown.

Shortcuts to a sense of place?

Shortcuts can work quite well with contemporary stories with a high romance content. In fact, sometimes all one needs is the right cover. Paris – Eiffel Tower. Rome – the Colosseum. New York – a yellow taxi. London – Big Ben or a red bus. Australia – Uluru. I have read many books where, apart from an establishing paragraph on the first page – Space Needle, that means Seattle, right? – and an occasional reminder, the location is completely irrelevant to the story.

locations

People fall in lust/love, consummate and commit all over the world and sometimes that relationship story arc is so important that no further frills are needed. In a London set story, arranging for your characters to meet by the London Eye or a scene on the Underground can be enough to remind the reader where they are. You can go a step further and have them decide not to go on the Eye because they didn’t book. Or on the Underground they can talk about the weird smell and remind each other to mind the gap. In Paris they can nip into a café-tabac to buy some stamps. But in other genres the readers often has no idea what they are getting into and location is just one of the things that need to be established.

Sci fi and fantasy may graft fantastical elements onto a solid foundation of familiar facts – for instance, Tolkien’s world is deeply rooted in Anglo-Saxon myth and legend and is filled with details familiar to people who live in rural areas – but others need their world’s built from the bedrock up. With a completely alien world, flora, fauna and society the author will have to spend a lot of words on establishing enough information for the reader to get a toehold while the story grabs them. In the Helliconia Trilogy, Brian Aldiss describes a planet where season last for centuries. His way to make this weird and wonderful place more accessible to the reader is to have a space station staffed by humans orbiting it to observe. The big advantage is that sci fi and fantasy readers tend to be a bit more forgiving of info dumps than m/m romance readers who want to get on to the action. So how much is too much?

I remember reading a fantasy novel once – book one of five books, each of which was 600+ pages. The author started the series with a fight scene that was fine but then spent 5 pages describing the codes by which the warrior class lived by. Then there was a scene in a library and 6 pages about education, comparative philology, and the social status of scribes. Later his quest party happened to need a boat – many pages about the local fishing industry, average yields and frequency with which boats are lost at sea. It was like being beaten up with an encyclopedia. Yes, the author had done his homework, had created a wonderful and vibrant world, but showed the reader ALL of it. It was a pity because the world and plot was fun but I just didn’t have the stamina to endure all the lectures. Tolkien got around this by using appendices [elves, very nearly immortal barring accidents, have a very low birth rate – I remember how relieved I was to see that because I’d been wondering why there wasn’t a lot more of them] and that is great if you’re writing in a genre that craves all the extras, while not perhaps wanting them as part of the narrative.

In Romance, readers expect things to be a bit more straightforward, but I still think that it’s very possible to give a terrific sense of place without over burdening readers with information or being overly clever.

Jan Struther used this bit of description to give her readers a sense of place – in the summer [because we need to locate in time as well]:

It was a Wedgwood day, with white clouds delicately modelled in relief against a sky of pale pure blue.

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For some people she could have stopped at Wedgewood day, because they would have made the immediate connection from Wedgwood to blue and white to the sky. But Wedgwood made many patterns of pottery.

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Also there may be readers who have no idea what “Wedgwood” is. Adding the second clause, provides a way in for people with a different experience. I still feel that a modern editor might blue pen “Wedgwood” and insert ‘beautiful’ instead to avoid the risk of alienating readers.

In Part 4 I think I might cut to the chase and use examples – show not tell, eh?