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Rainbow Snippets

rainbow snippets

Week 2 of the snippetry and here’s a little more of Calon Lan – an historical MM romance set during the Great War and told from the POV of the sister of one of the lovers. Here Bethan and Nye continue their conversation about Alwyn’s letters.

“They went through a lot together. It must be good for him to have someone who understands.”
“You’d think he’d sooner forget the bloody war.” Nye’s mouth was full of boiled ham and potato but Bethan heard the swear word clearly.
“Nye Harrhy, I’ll wash your mouth out,” she said. “I won’t have language like that in my house.”

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I don’t know about you, but I miss Six Sentence Sunday. I made an image to use for it and everything. Here is its:

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It was a huge group with a very diverse set of authors, some of whom absolutely rocked and some of whom I still follow. But eventually it folded and the group diverged into special interest groups. Most of the MM ones had words like “sexy” in their titles and I never really felt I fitted in there when posting six or however many sentences about whatever – loading a Long Nine, shoeing a horse, taking cavalry over rough ground, supplying an army in a harsh winter. But I still missed the weekly posts, the reasons to show up and display whatever I was working on. So I’m very pleased to be part of a brand new group started on Facebook by Charley Descouteax and Rian Durant. Here’s a new picture to go with the posts:

rainbow snippets

 

And here is my snippet for this week. It’s from a short story called Calon Lan, set in Wales during the Great War, and it’s a MM romance told from the point of view of the sister of one of the protagonists. These are the first few sentences of the story:

Bethan put the plate on the table and craned her neck to peer past her husband and through the window. The farmyard, still misty even though it was past noon, was empty apart from a few fowls.

“He’s run down the lane.” Nye picked up his knife and fork. “We saw the post cart. Beats me what Alwyn and his pals find to write about.”

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Hump Day Hook #4

I have just realised that it’s Wednesday! And that means only one thing – Hump Day Hook!

By clicking on that link to read all the other snippets you will be excited, enthralled, entertained and maybe even a teensy bit aroused. Or you can stay here and read mine XD

My snippets come from a parody Regency Romance that I wrote when I ran out of Georgette Heyers and couldn’t find anything else approaching her good-humoured daffyness. So how far have we got? Aubrey has given Cholmondely [pronounced Chumley] his IOU and they have separated.

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Aubrey made his way a trifle unsteadily to the supper room where he sat, wolfing ham and mustard and eyeing the Olympian gods and goddesses who could still be discerned on the smoke-stained ceiling.
“I say, Charles,” he called as he spotted a friend making his way towards him, “that Venus is a bit of an armful.”
Charles glanced upwards, grimaced, and jerked a thumb towards the main salon.
“Freddy sent me,” he grunted. “Best come, Chum’s in a pickle.” Then he set off again towards the ham.
Aubrey stretched and sighed. It was wonderful to be young and rich and have a good head for claret. He would extricate Chum from his ‘pickle’, he promised himself, and then – well, the night was young, anything might happen.

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Regency meals were very meat heavy. No wonder they got gout. Have you ever had gout? Believe me, you don’t want it.

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So here we go. New Sunday and a new Six Sunday substitute with a banner that’s just right up my alley. click on it for th link to the list of other participants:

Mmm, just gorgeous. I’ll be posting twice weekly from now on – 8 sentences on Sundays for WWW and a paragraph or so on Wednesdays for the Hump Day Hook event. I figure 2 little ones a week will be more fun and less guilt inducing than trying, and failing, to get round 200 writers on a Sunday.

To kick off with I’ll be posting excerpts from my novel On A Lee Shore, which is set in the early 18th century and is an affectionate tribute to all those 40s and 50s pirate films with people like Burt Lancaster or Errol Flynn swinging in the rigging with their shirts off. I can’t do too much of it because I’ve done sizeable excerpts before and am getting close to my limit for a published work.

Lt Christopher – Kit – Penrose, newest and most uncomfortable crew member on the pirate sloop Africa, is doing his best to cope and, up to now has manage, he thinks, rather well.

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Soon it was the brief twilight, the sun setting in a blaze of gold and madder, stars pricking out overhead before the western horizon had cooled. Kit had the dogwatch, so he took himself off to his hammock, stripping to his breeches but still sweating in the sweltering fug of the fo’c’sle. He slept soundly that night and his dreams, if he had any, were no trial to him. But something roused him, and he lay dozing in that warm hinterland between sleep and waking where nothing much makes sense. Least of all the shift of air as his blanket slipped and the soft humming of “Lowlands, Low.” Then a hand touched his belly and moved down to grip hard. Kit swung a fist, felt it connect, and then tumbled off the other side of the hammock. He landed on his feet, fists clenched, panting with the pain of the tight squeeze.

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There’s nothing as unsettling as being woken from sleep by a death grip on your nads. Or is there? What do you think?

 

 

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Six Sentence Sunday

SSS AFR It’s Sunday!!

Time for another bunch of sixes from authors near and far. Just go here and read your socks off. There are erotic romances, sweet romances, action adventure military gritty distopian futures, sweet YA comedies and some stuff that is, to my taste, compellingly wierd 🙂 just love it.

So – last week in my six we left Cynfal with a warm armful and his nose in Gwion’s ear. Gwion seemed to be getting a little tense. Again I’m going to put it under a cut just because I quite like doing that. It might make people think it’s naughtier than it is!

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Honestly, it’s not as though there’s a narrow window of opportunity, either. But I’ve got a decent excuse this week in that I’m full of cold and, an unrelated problem, am seeing double with my right eye. There’s something VERY unpleasant about not being able to see properly. Very unpleasant and very scary when one relies on ones eyes as a reader, writer, reviewer, artist and general admin dogsbody at work. Yuk. I hope it sorts itself out soon.

Meanwhile, if you’ve come here for a bit of fiction I don’t want you to feel let down so here’s rather more than six sentences of A Fierce Reaping.

It’s deep winter and the men of the warband are restive. A few weeks ago Gwion punched Moried in the mouth, now Moried is looking for some payback.

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Cynfal was rocking in time to the music of Gwion’s harp and singing along lustily trying to drown out Aeddan’s equally loud but more random efforts. It was a short while before they realised that the music had stopped and that the singing in one part of the hall had turned into shocked shouts.
“What happened?”
Cynfal didn’t need to ask the question. It was running from lip to lip around the hall. Men were on their feet, craning their necks. As usual of their party it was Aeddan who had to know. He stood, his hand on Cynfal’s shoulder to steady himself, and stretched to see.
“Damn,” he said. “Moried’s squaring up to that harper of yours.” He was still having problems saying Gwion’s name.
Another phrase was running about the hall, hissed this time in tones of derision, shock and horror depending on the man who repeated it.
Aeddan sat down abruptly. “Why would he do that?” he asked, lips twisted with distaste.
“What?” Cynfal demanded.
“Moried cut the harpstrings. Said that since he had nothing sensible to say Gwion might as well be truely voiceless for the night. Even Hyfaidd looked a bit shocked until Gwion invited Moried outside to discuss it. Now he’s grinning and laying bets.”
Cynfal got up and craned his neck but it was hard to see over the heads and round the shoulders. From further up the hall he heard the rumble of voices, a shout of laughter, Moried’s clear voice, though he could not make out the words.
Then men stilled and silenced and Cynfal heard the King.
“This is most distressing,” he said, his calm old voice carrying clearly in the hush. “Moried – returning insult for insult is of no benefit to anyone, even though, as I heard it, Gwion merely replied to your chafing with one ill-considered if well aimed blow. To cut his strings while he was playing has caused injury as well as insult. I see no reason why you should not be allowed to settle your differences but not in the hall, if you please. There is no room. Take your fight outside. Hyfaidd, a word, please. Cynon, Ceredig – I trust you will see that there are no fatalities and that the conflict does not spread. Hear me all. This is a personal matter between Gwion and Moried. Nobody else is to get involved.”
Well fed and half full of mead, it wasn’t to be expected that the men of Gododdin would forgo the entertainment of a fight, especially if it was between two men that they generally considered to be less warriors than – truth to tell – lapdogs.
Cynfal had heard nothing but praise for Llif, and Gwion had been part of that legend – his devoted and loving sheild bearer, singing praises to his lover. Alone, Gwion was a discarded plaything. Moried, though having the reputation of a soldier, fulfilled some of the same function for Hyfaidd, only with the edge of his sharp tongue instead of the beauty of his verses.
“I wonder which,” Gwenabwy demanded as they piled out of the hall, “will burst into tears and cry for his mother first?”
“Moried hates Gwion,” someone whispered. “You watch – he’ll be aiming for his hands.”
“My money’s on the harper,” another shouted. “These half men can be vicious creatures.”
Cynfal forced his way through them trying to find a place from which he could see. Butting his shoulders into gaps he made a path for Aeddan and the rest of his bothy to follow until they reached the edge of a space and were halted by Tudfwlch who was standing with his arms spread.
“Stand,” he called. “Leave them space.”
Cynfal defeated the efforts of someone to pull him back with a well placed elbow and dug in his heels to push back against the men who were pressing forward. The crowd spilled out sideways from the doors, spreading along the side of the hall at the direction of Tudfwlch, Cynon and Ceredig. Hyfaidd and his friends stepped past them into a space of their own and a boy set down a stool for Hyfaidd before being sent to fetch mead. Cynfal was aware of this while craning his neck to try and find Gwion.
Moried stepped out arms raised as his supporters cheered and those who, like Cynfal, thought he was a shit jeered. Gwion’s reception was quieter. He took no notice of the heaving press of men around him but strode into the centre of the space that had been left for them and turned to Moried. There was blood on his face, probably the injury Marro had mentioned, most probably caused by the lash of a broken harpstring. A thin trickle ran down from his hairline and widened across the cheekbone where he had wiped at it. There was a murmur at that. At one time drawing the blood of a bard had been punishable by death and it was still ill-omened. Gwion had shed his cloak and stood looking thin and cold with the icy wind plastering his shirt to his chest. His face was white under the smear of blood, but Cynfal felt that was more from cold than fear. Obviously some kind of arrangement had been reached because Moried reached for and was passed two staves. He weighed them in his hands and made his selection, tossing the other to Gwion who fumbled the catch. Moried smirked.
As Gwion stooped to pick it up, Hyfaidd shouted “Begin!” and Moried brought the staff down with a thwack across Gwion’s shoulders, driving him to one knee. Gwion grunted, blocked the next blow with his forearm and brought his own staff up in a vicious swipe that caught Moried across the knee.
Both hurt, both scowling they moved a little apart, Gwion light on his feet, Moried limping on the left.
“No killing blows,” Ceredig bellowed. “And I for one would prefer it if there could be only minor injuries too.”
Moried nodded but Gwion didn’t acknowledge Ceredig. His eyes were fixed on Moried who began to move crabwise, circling, waiting for an opportunity.
Cynfal bit his lip. He knew what he would do to upset a harper like Gwion and sure enough after a moment, Moried rapped sharply at Gwion’s knuckles with the end of his staff. Such a blow could break fingers and if it had struck Cynfal was sure it would have. Gwion jerked his hand aside. He made a wild sweep at Moried’s legs then jerked back from a jab to his face.
“Get on with it,” Hyfaidd bellowed, annoyed at the cautious exchange of attacks.
“I don’t want it to be over too fast,” Moried replied, pitching his voice so it would carry. “I want everyone to see this. I want everyone to admire Gwion’s grace, his fine footwork, that nice tight little arse. Maybe then he’ll be able to find someone else to fill it.”
Cynfal groaned as Gwion snarled and stepped forward again, right into a cracking blow across his ribs. He gasped and Moried laughed as he stumbled back out of range.
“That’s it,” Hyfaidd said. “Now Gwion. Come on. You’ve just been called a heifer in front of the whole of the company. Are you going to fight back or just snivel about it?”
Gwion ducked his head and took a couple of paces back. For a moment Cynfal thought he was retreating, giving ground, surrendering, but he was buying space to give himself time to look to Cynon.
Cynon was glaring at Moried but when Gwion caught his eye he gave a sharp nod.
Permission, then. Cynfal took a deep breath and let out the hound yelp used by troop three. Other men took it up and Cynfal shouted Gwion’s name. Gwion’s head came up and he altered his grip on the stave.
Moried snorted and stepped forward, staff beginning a sweep. Gwion parried, the two lengths of wood coming together with a crack. The butt whistled round to thud into Moried’s knee again. Moried stumbled, using the end of the stave to steady himself, then struck back. A vicious thrust to the groin. But Gwion was already in the air, bounding high over Moried’s staff, his own lodged against the stone. Long legs extended to thud into Moried’s chest. Moried staggered back dropping his staff, and Gwion followed him down. He landed on Moried’s chest with one knee against his belly and the staff across his throat grinding down to stifle and crush.
“Yield.” His lips formed the word, but Cynfal had no doubt that Moried heard them. Purpling as he gasped for breath, he could not reply but held up both hands in surrender.

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Six Sentence Sunday

Aaaaaand it’s time for Six Sunday!!

Six Sentence Sunday where by going to this Linky link, a whole passel of different world opens u to the eager reader. Whether your thing is steampunk, sci fi, vampire, shifter, inspirational, YA or any combination of the above you’ll be able to find something to suit your taste.

I have been particularly enjoying work by Goran Zidar, Steven Montano, Sarah Ballance, CC Williams, Jess Schira and Ruth Griffin but that’s by no means the full list [so please don’t be offended if you aren’t on it.]

Hmm – this week – I dunno. My plans for writing more of A Fierce Reaping for Nanowrimo have gone, as we say locally, tits up, but I’m really missing Cynfal and the lads. Here’s another bit, taken from after the last bit, where Cynfal suggested that Gwion join them on a trip to fetch firewood:

Gwion managed his accidental meeting with Cynon’s troop with a casual air that Cynfal admired.  He wasn’t sure if it fooled Cynon but the troop leader merely waved when the horseman appeared on the edge of the wood and cantered towards them.
Llif’s horse was a bright chestnut stallion with a rim of white about one fore hoof.  The beast was splashed with mud and had a little sweat whorling the thick hair on its breast but still had the energy to dance down the slope, squealing a greeting as it came. Gwion was sitting tight, forearms rigid as he held the big horse in, snowflakes dusting his hair and the shoulders of his cloak. Dressed for work, in well-worn and serviceable clothes, which were still better than many men’s best, he looked like what he was – a gently born yet sensible lad exercising his most prized possession and taking a chance encounter with pleasure.

More next week.

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Six Sentence Sunday

Here we go again – click here to see the Six Sunday site where this week one hundred and eighty three authors have signed up to show six sentences of their published works or WIPs. Click on that link and a whole world of fiction will open up for you – eveything from gritty dystopian futures, or pasts, action adventures in strange places, and familiar ones, Love stories where girls lust for boys, boys sigh for girls, and a big hairy warrior picks a wild rose bud to tuck in the shoulder brooch of a dearly beloved shield brother.

But I’m getting a bit ahead of myself there.

My six this week is, as usual, from A Fierce Reaping. Cynfal needs armour, Gwion has some. Cynfal has very little to trade but Gwion is comely, lonely and looks like he needs a good seeing to. A solution that should solve all their problems suggests itself.

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Cynfal had been into Gwion’s home, had seen the bed he had shared with his dead lover.  As he left, he took care not to look back this time because to do so, he felt would be pushy. Or perhaps the attention might give Gwion the feeling that despite being damaged he was still worthy and that might help things along?
He couldn’t decide and, by the time he had made up his mind, Gwion was out of sight again with only the sweet drift of notes to show he was there at all.  Cynfal scowled. It was so much simpler when all one wanted was a good time – seduction as a means to an end was too much like hard work.

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Six Sentence Sunday

Six Sunday again – go here to see the incredible list of incredible contributors and read the excerpts!

I am continuing A Fierce Reaping from where I left off last week with Cynfal sounding out just how interested the bereaved Gwion is, with a view to getting his big hairy paws on Gwion’s dead lover’s armour.

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“I heard,” Cynfal said.  “I’m sorry, and I’m sorry you were hurt as well.” He returned to the door and reached out to give Gwion a gentler version of the punch in the arm that Pup and March seemed to quite enjoy. “Come with us … maybe Llif’s horse needs exercising?” Gwion’s small smile confirmed his guess. “You could meet us – accidentally, and then come along for the company?”

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Here we go again! Six Sunday is a chance for authors to display samples of their work six sentences at a time, click here to see a full list of all the others.

I’m carrying on with my excerpts from A Fierce Reaping, a story set in the 7th century AD concerning a warband sent south for a rumble with the Saxons of Bernicia, now Yorkshire, thus setting a precedent for future conflicts that continued with edged weapons until the 198th century and fists and boots today on the rugby pitch. Tradition is a wonderful thing.

Cynfal desperately needs a set of body armour – lightweight, flexible squares of studded leather, well greased against the wet – and has established that Gwion, the harper, has a spare set. Continuing directly from last week:

Gwion had stepped from the doorway to allow more light in and was holding his harp, one hand flat on the strings to still them. He was looking at the carving on the neck of the harp and only taking surreptitious glances at Cynfal. Cynfal pretended not to have noticed as he moved around the building, which was as well finished as the hall in Din Eidin.
“Did you do all the work yourself, you and …?” Cynfal asked.
“Llif – yes, just us.” Gwion hesitated, again came that characteristic swallow, the sweep of tongue tip across tight lips. “He died,” he added.

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